Tell me all your stories!
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Thread Topic: Tell me all your stories!
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edited page in chapter 1! I hope this helps dragon's fire!
“Cool you’re a phoenix!” Sandra yells, somehow still unaware that we are the only Addermans alive.
“Look, Sandra, Peter, I’m sorry, but your parents, and grandparents, as well as mine are, um,” I don’t know how to say it even though I just said it more aggressively, “They probably died fighting for us,” I finally said.
“Wait, mom and dad are dead?” Sandra is teary and Peter is just sitting there. “Why are they dead?” I feel like I can’t answer that question, but I do.
“You see, a long time ago, there was us, the Adderman’s, people who can morph into animals. But there was also a person who was a Adderman, but not a good one. He, at one point, created his own name and family and went off to live somewhere else. Then he came back with many warriors in the form of a black panther. The Adderman’s defeated them, but nobody can remember their family name, so we call them the evil ones.The evil ones promised a century after they were killed, they would take revenge on us.”
Sandra and Peter looked shocked and confused at the same time. -
dragon's fire, what do you think of chapter three, sorry, forgot about chapter two, they are meeting a black panther named Teresa who is claiming herself to be queen.
Chapter 3
“I don’t know if I can give you that much help, but your entire family, way before even your great grandparents were born, gave my great ancestor Matthew the white panther this message.” Teresa pulled out a scroll that was addressed to:
Sheila Adderman
We know you will be the answer to our questions.
“Me?” I am surprised they knew I would exist,”How could they predict-”
“Your ancestors were very powerful people, never question what they could do.” Teresa interrupted me. I slowly opened the scroll and it read: Dear Sheila,
We know you will be young when you receive this message, and that we will be dead. But we have also received a message, that YOU will find out something important. Something that will change the way think, you must not change your mind.
“Change my mind about what?” I asked Teresa after reading it. She seemed to be thinking about this.
“I don’t think that what they have predicted has happened yet Sheila,” she replied after a while,”Maybe we can find something that will help us figure out what happened.”
Now Peter, who was quite bored and had no idea what he was doing and decided to duel with Sandra, lion vs tiger. While they were dueling they ran into a gigantic glass sculpture, which broke the the second they touched it, causing a loud
CLISH!
“What was that!” I screamed over the sound that seemed to ring across the room.
“You broke the sculpture of Kioo!” Queen Teresa yelled,”You have brought terrible things upon us!” That last sentence she said through gritted and launched herself at Peter.
I tried to stop her but it was too late, Teresa raked her claws across Peter’s back right before I pulled her off of him.
“Somebody get a doctor!” Sandra yelled, for a lion would not have minded this injury, but Peter was human, and that was a fatal hit. Teresa tried to attack me as well, but I held her to the ground until she calmed down.
I quickly told the guards we needed a doctor ASAP and they ran off. I ran back into the room and saw Teresa staring in horror at the broken glass.
“You said we brought terrible things,” I ask Queen Teresa,”Why is that glass so important?”
She stared out at nothing and finally shuddered,”That glass sculpture was a peace offering from a great magical force called the Kioo.” She looked scared.
“They are lead by a ferocious black panther who claims to be my brother.” Did she say BLACK PANTHER!
“Umm, Queen Teresa, you wouldn’t happen to know that a black panther is also the leader of the EVIL ONES!” She stares at me and looks shocked.
“But he did a test to prove he was my brother!” She shouted back.
A deep voice suddenly shouted,”Queen Teresa? Queen of what?” he chuckled and a huge black panther with a scar across his eye was standing right in front of them.
“Teresa, dear sister, you broke the glass,” the black panther said softly.
“It was an accident!” She cried as if begging for mercy. Then many black panthers walked forward.
“There are no accidents,” the black panther whispered before he called,”ATTACK!” -
Also, in chapter 1, are Sandra and Peter your friends, siblings, or what. And are they older than you? If they are, how could they know about this and you not.
In chapter 3, So, why is everybody yelling? It seems more likely that they'd not be yelling. Maybe, talking quietly or their voices rising. And why and how did the evil one's leader pop into existence just then? -
Now, that you say it, I should do that, you are awesome! kinda like a online editor!
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I guess.
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I have an idea! What if we come up with a topic and write stories based on it? Like something sort of random.
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I guess we could do that.
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Hey! That sounds like a great idea!!!
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Have any of you read the hobbit? Because I just finished it, and it is awesome!
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You just read it?
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I have an idea for the first random one! Let's see, um, TREES
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There was a great pounding outside. A pounding so great it could wake the trees. in fact, the pounding was because of the trees, for they were bringing upon mankind the wrath of their losses. The humans were running with all their might to escape the destruction the now very alive trees were causing all around them.
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That's all I can think of at the moment.
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Alright, I'll go.
It was a terrible time for the trees. People were destroying them, burning them, using them to create things for their own uses.
The trees hated all humans, except for one. Flik. Flik was a gentle little nymph like creature, who always faded into the background at school, always kept to himself.
He would come, every day, to talk to the trees. They would always listen, bending their heads if they couldn't hear him right. He was the only one who could hear their voices in the wind, the only one who understood.
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that sounds great! here is mine:
There is a land called Erevuchui, and that land is filled with tree people. They respect even their enemies and never fight. One day dark elves came into the land and killed the tree person leader and took all the other ones as slaves. Since the tree people don't know how to fight, they were defenseless. They were tortured for years until a young tree person, who had been the only tree not captured, hatched revenge. He taught himself to fight and killed all the dark elves. Then he saved all the trees and returned to home. But it doesn't end there. The tree was hated for betraying the code of no fighting or killing. He was sentenced to death by falling off a cliff. Everyone but him lived happily every after.
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