Short story
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Thread Topic: Short story
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Knock knock. Nothing. Alex exhaled, then watched his breath dissapate. He was about to knock again, but a voice told him to go away. He raised his finger to protest, but the voice only screamed louder. Alex looked to a person in the window, then left. He thought of the hatred in his eyes. The pills fell from his pocket, and he rushed to get them. As soon as he was home, he pulled a box from under his bed. Angel jumped up. She thought she she heard something. She shrugged it off, then went to the kitchen. Shge saw a picture of her and Alex as kids. She decided to go see him. Naturally, she had a key and let herself in. She opened up Alex's room, only to find a splatter of blood on the wall, and a revolver in Alex's hands. His lips were blue and his face lifeless.
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(1 month earlier)
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Alex sighed, slowly walking across the room. His hands were behind his back, he stopped at a boy. Light brown hair, double lip piercing, PTV bracelet. Alex pulled out a black rose, then kissed the boy on the cheek "Happy 6th Anniversary. I love you, Jam. We'll never part, I promise you that"
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Leah Janelle NewbieThis sounds so rushed
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It kinda was.
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