"Chain Mail"
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Thread Topic: "Chain Mail"
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(I will continue this later I am just going outside to eat something bye)
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Joms was at the bathroom texting Janna if things are ok but suddenly his phone was lagging so much. Someone post on his time line saying:
I will not stop until one of you will die!
Joms went outside to find Travis, his arm still hurts because of the glass it is still bleeding but he tries to ignore it. Meanwhile while Janna and Fhidland were looking stuffs downstairs, Janna saw some pictures of Yael and Andrew that has blood on it. Janna got frightened about that and continues on searching for Travis. Just then someone is banging the door loudly the man with an axe broke down the door and starts hunting for them! Fhidland was alerted and hides inside the cabinet, while Janna tries to hide behind the laundries. The man was at the laundry room where he smash the washing machine into pieces. The man left the room, Janna was at ease and was catching her breath after that.
At the Kitchen 11 am
The place was flooded the water was rising. Yael and Andrew stand on top of the table. There were in trouble the water kept rising.
Upstairs
Joms realize that Travis is still alive because the message said that he will not stop until someone dies. Joms was wandering around looking for Travis and in the distance he saw someone on a chair tied up! -
As Joms approach that person tied up on the chair. It was a familiar face for him.
Joms: Travis?
As he got more closer it was really Travis!
Travis: You neee to...
Before he could say what he is going to say, Joms got hit by a wood plank by a man.
Downstairs
Janna went to get Fhidland, as she went pass the kitchen se heard a screaming noise inside of it like someone drowning
In the kitchen
Yael and Andrew have online few space left for their face! The water just kept rising! Meanwhile Janna went to get her phone and repost it to 10 people. The door got unlocked and Yael and Andrew were able to get out of there.
Upstairs
Joms and Travis was tied up into the chairs the man said:
Haha! Thanks to your friend she repost it to 10 people!
Joms: No I wont let this happen!
As the man fade away, Joms and Travis escaped and went downstairs. They were all safe but the Chain Mails sent by Janna can be their death again!
Note: Thank you for reading this. This is just the introduction of the Chain Mail Book. I will be making the first chapter soon if you guys want more you can leave me suggestion what will happen next! -
Chapter 1
The 10 Victims
Introduction: After Janna sent those Chain Mails to her 10 friends, death starts again for them. Who are the 10 people who are next for death?
Monday at School
Joms was curious about who got those Chain Mails. As he ask around, someone on the hall was screaming in terror. As he look around, he saw Roanne.
Roanne: Someone sent me a Chain Mail!
Joms: Whatever you do, do not post it to 10 people!
Roanne: Why? I will die!
Roanne quickly copy and paste it but Joms took her phone and ran. He tried to get away from her but she just won't give up. He went to hide on the boy's bathroom to throw it on the toilet as soon as he throw it, Roanne was angry and kick Joms.
During Recess
Joms was eating, suddenly Roanne's Mother pinch his ear.
Roanne's Mother: Why the hell did you throw my Daughter's phone in the toilet!?
Roanne's Mother was furious of what I did.
Joms: Well you see, your daughter was about to kill 10 people!
Roanne's Mother: So now your accusing my Daughter as a murderer!?
Joms: To be clear, your daughter was about to send Chain Mails to innocent people!
Roanne's Mother got angry and she drag Joms to the Principal's Office. -
Nice story but you should fix the mistake there it should be kicked not kick
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Sorry I sometimes forgot that this is past tense am doing and every verb is pass tense not really
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Let me fix the others
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Well I decided not to, I will let you do your thing and I have a suggestion after every chapter can you post them all in one post?
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Ok sure wait
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I will ad more later bye
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Introduction
The book is all about Chain Mail well it's scary stuff but it's not real but in this story it's real! So the story begins with a boy name Joms who doesn't believe in Chain Mails but one day him and his friends got an email from an unknown user who sent a Chain Mail letter to them on Facebook. The letter was so horrifying but Joms chose to ignore it but this letter could be their death!
One Saturday Morning
Joms was relaxing at his house. He was playing on his computer, suddenly someone post something on Facebook. Joms took a look at it and it said:
Chain Mail is real! Believe me! I will post a photo on your timeline, a person that ignores this died! Joms was having second thoughs but he carries on playing his game. Just then a notification on Facebook comes and it said: Unknown User just posted on your timeline. Joms was shocked and confused, he is not even friends with that maniac. As he check his timeline it was horrible, a person's dead body. Joms tried to remove it on his timeline but Facebook was not responding so he shut down his computer and went outside!
Yael's House
Joms went over to Yael's house to talk about it, Andrew was also there when he arrived.
Joms: Yael look at this post
Yael: Why?
As Yael look he was disgusted
Yael: WTF!
Andrew was scared
Andrew: Kuya Joms is that real?
Joms: I don't know
They took a closer look on it and they decided to ask their friends out to come over tonight.
7:30 PM
Only some of them are here
Travis
Fhidland
Janna
As they had a sleep over, Joms showed the photo. Everyone was disturbed. For further inspections they look at the person's profile who sent this and suddenly the power went out! All of them scream and suddenly someone posted on their timeline:
One of you is going to die tonight!
Rain poured loudly leading to thunderstorms. Joms was curious and did not believe.
Joms: This has to be a joke!
Janna: It is real, my friend died because of this!
As they argue about it being real or fake but someone is missing! Yael was at the kitchen, Andrew was with him, Fhidland was here sitting on the couch but Travis was gone!
As they look for Travis, he was nowhere to be found, suddenly a strange noise upstairs got Joms' attention.
Upstairs
As Joms and Janna went up, they heard a screaming sound so they go up quickly to see what's happening there.
At The Kitchen
Yael and Andrew were at the kitchen, Andrew was eating while Yael was looking for something.
Yael: Andrew where's the photo!
Andrew: I don't know!
Suddenly the door shut! Both of them were locked inside. Yael opens the window and saw a guy with a chainsaw, it was a close call for him because Andrew push him away there.
Upstairs
As Joms and Janna take a look upstairs, blood was everywhere. Joms was doubting himself, he was starting to think if this is real!
Joms: Janna go back and take a look on Fhidland
Janna: Joms you might die because of that Chain Mail
Joms: Just go!
Downstairs
Janna went down stairs to go check on Fhidland.
Upstairs
Joms was crying and he screamed!
Joms: Chain Mail!
The rain got louder and the window broke in front of him. The glass hit his arm. Joms was in pain holding his arm and suddenly someone was coming closer going up stairs, who could it be?
Joms saw a man with a knife sliding it on the walll. Joms ran away and tries to escape him but his foot got stuck on the hole of the floor he tried to remove his shoes and it worked. The man with a knife almost stab his foot but Joms got away and went to the bathroom and locked the door!
Downstairs
[i]Downstairs Janna took a look at Fhidland and ask:
Janna: Do you have any idea where is Travis
Fhidland: I am worry about him I have no idea!
Janna was panicking while Fhidland was scared.
At The Kitchen
Yael got a knife and stab it on the door, the kitchen was far away from Janna and Fhidland. Yael was screaming for help, Andrew tried to help by getting a knife too and stabbing it into the door! Suddenly the sink's pipe broke leading the kitchen flood with water.
Yael: Crap, hurry up Andrew break the door!
Andrew: Dammit!
Andrew furiously stab the door and accidentally stab his finger. Andrew was hurt and blood comes dripping on his finger. Yael was still stabing the door and looked at Andrew in tears knowing they are going to die!
In The Bathroom
Joms was at the bathroom texting Janna if things are ok but suddenly his phone was lagging so much. Someone post on his Timeline saying:
I will not stop until one of you die!
Joms went outside to find Travis, his arm still hurts because of the glass it is still bleeding but he tries to ignore it.
Downstairs
While Janna and Fhidland were looking stuffs downstairs, Janna saw some pictures of Yael and Andrew that has blood on it. Janna got frightened about that and continues on searching for Travis. Just then someone is banging the door loudly the man with an axe broke down the door and starts hunting for them! Fhidland was alerted and hides inside the cabinet, while Janna tries to hide behind the laundries. The man was at the laundry room where he smash the washing machine into pieces. The man left the room, Janna was at ease and was catching her breath after that.
At the Kitchen 11 am
The place was flooded the water was rising. Yael and Andrew stand on top of the table. There were in trouble the water kept rising.
Upstairs
Joms realize that Travis is still alive because the message said that he will not stop until someone dies so which mean that man haven't killed any yet. Joms was wandering around looking for Travis and in the distance he saw someone on a chair tied up.
As Joms approach that person tied up on the chair. It was a familiar face for him.
Joms: Travis?
As he got more closer it was really Travis.
Travis: You need to...
Before he could say what he is going to say, Joms got hit by a wood plank by the man.
Downstairs
Janna went to get Fhidland, as she went pass the kitchen she heard a screaming noise inside of it like someone drowning.
In The Kitchen
[i]Yael and Andrew have only few spaces left for their face! The water just kept rising! Meanwhile Janna went to get her phone and repost it to 10 people. The door got unlocked and Yael and Andrew were able to get out of there.
Upstairs
Joms and Travis was tied up into the chairs the man said:
Haha! Thanks to your friend she repost it to 10 people!
Joms: No I won't let this happen!
Downstairs
As the man fade away, Joms and Travis escaped and went downstairs. They were all safe but the Chain Mails sent by Janna can be their death again! -
Crap It has a mistake
[i]Downstairs Janna took a look at Fhidland and ask: -
Forgot to remove the [i]
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Am so tired rewriting all of this well techincally I just add the UBB Codes and change some things there
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Introduction
The book is all about Chain Mail well it's scary stuff but it's not real but in this story it's real! So the story begins with a boy name Joms who doesn't believe in Chain Mails but one day him and his friends got an email from an unknown user who sent a Chain Mail letter to them on Facebook. The letter was so horrifying but Joms chose to ignore it but this letter could be their death!
One Saturday Morning
Joms was relaxing at his house. He was playing on his computer, suddenly someone post something on Facebook. Joms took a look at it and it said:
Chain Mail is real! Believe me! I will post a photo on your timeline, a person that ignores this died! Joms was having second thoughs but he carries on playing his game. Just then a notification on Facebook comes and it said: Unknown User just posted on your timeline. Joms was shocked and confused, he is not even friends with that maniac. As he check his timeline it was horrible, a person's dead body. Joms tried to remove it on his timeline but Facebook was not responding so he shut down his computer and went outside!
Yael's House
Joms went over to Yael's house to talk about it, Andrew was also there when he arrived.
Joms: Yael look at this post
Yael: Why?
As Yael look he was disgusted
Yael: WTF!
Andrew was scared
Andrew: Kuya Joms is that real?
Joms: I don't know
They took a closer look on it and they decided to ask their friends out to come over tonight.
7:30 PM
Only some of them are here
Travis
Fhidland
Janna
As they had a sleep over, Joms showed the photo. Everyone was disturbed. For further inspections they look at the person's profile who sent this and suddenly the power went out! All of them scream and suddenly someone posted on their timeline:
One of you is going to die tonight!
Rain poured loudly leading to thunderstorms. Joms was curious and did not believe.
Joms: This has to be a joke!
Janna: It is real, my friend died because of this!
As they argue about it being real or fake but someone is missing! Yael was at the kitchen, Andrew was with him, Fhidland was here sitting on the couch but Travis was gone!
As they look for Travis, he was nowhere to be found, suddenly a strange noise upstairs got Joms' attention.
Upstairs
As Joms and Janna went up, they heard a screaming sound so they go up quickly to see what's happening there.
At The Kitchen
Yael and Andrew were at the kitchen, Andrew was eating while Yael was looking for something.
Yael: Andrew where's the photo!
Andrew: I don't know!
Suddenly the door shut! Both of them were locked inside. Yael opens the window and saw a guy with a chainsaw, it was a close call for him because Andrew push him away there.
Upstairs
As Joms and Janna take a look upstairs, blood was everywhere. Joms was doubting himself, he was starting to think if this is real!
Joms: Janna go back and take a look on Fhidland
Janna: Joms you might die because of that Chain Mail
Joms: Just go!
Downstairs
Janna went down stairs to go check on Fhidland.
Upstairs
Joms was crying and he screamed!
Joms: Chain Mail!
The rain got louder and the window broke in front of him. The glass hit his arm. Joms was in pain holding his arm and suddenly someone was coming closer going up stairs, who could it be?
Joms saw a man with a knife sliding it on the walll. Joms ran away and tries to escape him but his foot got stuck on the hole of the floor he tried to remove his shoes and it worked. The man with a knife almost stab his foot but Joms got away and went to the bathroom and locked the door!
Downstairs
[i]Downstairs Janna took a look at Fhidland and ask:
Janna: Do you have any idea where is Travis
Fhidland: I am worry about him I have no idea!
Janna was panicking while Fhidland was scared.
At The Kitchen
Yael got a knife and stab it on the door, the kitchen was far away from Janna and Fhidland. Yael was screaming for help, Andrew tried to help by getting a knife too and stabbing it into the door! Suddenly the sink's pipe broke leading the kitchen flood with water.
Yael: Crap, hurry up Andrew break the door!
Andrew: Dammit!
Andrew furiously stab the door and accidentally stab his finger. Andrew was hurt and blood comes dripping on his finger. Yael was still stabing the door and looked at Andrew in tears knowing they are going to die!
In The Bathroom
Joms was at the bathroom texting Janna if things are ok but suddenly his phone was lagging so much. Someone post on his Timeline saying:
I will not stop until one of you die!
Joms went outside to find Travis, his arm still hurts because of the glass it is still bleeding but he tries to ignore it.
Downstairs
While Janna and Fhidland were looking stuffs downstairs, Janna saw some pictures of Yael and Andrew that has blood on it. Janna got frightened about that and continues on searching for Travis. Just then someone is banging the door loudly the man with an axe broke down the door and starts hunting for them! Fhidland was alerted and hides inside the cabinet, while Janna tries to hide behind the laundries. The man was at the laundry room where he smash the washing machine into pieces. The man left the room, Janna was at ease and was catching her breath after that.
At the Kitchen 11 am
The place was flooded the water was rising. Yael and Andrew stand on top of the table. There were in trouble the water kept rising.
Upstairs
Joms realize that Travis is still alive because the message said that he will not stop until someone dies so which mean that man haven't killed any yet. Joms was wandering around looking for Travis and in the distance he saw someone on a chair tied up.
As Joms approach that person tied up on the chair. It was a familiar face for him.
Joms: Travis?
As he got more closer it was really Travis.
Travis: You need to...
Before he could say what he is going to say, Joms got hit by a wood plank by the man.
Downstairs
Janna went to get Fhidland, as she went pass the kitchen she heard a screaming noise inside of it like someone drowning.
In The Kitchen
[i]Yael and Andrew have only few spaces left for their face! The water just kept rising! Meanwhile Janna went to get her phone and repost it to 10 people. The door got unlocked and Yael and Andrew were able to get out of there.
Upstairs
Joms and Travis was tied up into the chairs the man said:
Haha! Thanks to your friend she repost it to 10 people!
Joms: No I won't let this happen!
Downstairs
As the man fade away, Joms and Travis escaped and went downstairs. They were all safe but the Chain Mails sent by Janna can be their death again!
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