My story
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Thread Topic: My story
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My parents were fighting again. I only they would shutup maybe I could get some sleep around here. It's the same thing every night. Soon they will wvntually get a divorce and when they do maybe I could get some sleep. Well since I'm up I might as well sneak out to the basically only sane place in new York. A hidden clearing in central park.
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I would've read this sooner, but I had to go to bed
That's... actually very good! It was attaching, like making the reader want to ask questions and whatnot... That's always good. The sentences are a bit short, but yeah, that was pretty good -
Thnx srry im so lqte i had to go to school. And ill try qbd nqke thé sentences q bit longer
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