Characters V2
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Thread Topic: Characters V2
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Name : Ryder Diego ( her real name is Indigo spider dance )
Age : At her first introduction Ryder believed her self to be eighteen. But she realised she wasn't when she noticed she didn't age at all.
Gender : female
Bio : Ryder was killed by her elder brother on her eighteenth birthday. He murdered her with a ritual knife in their backgarden where she was wiating for the birthday suprise he promised. Her death was to give him power as well as relinquish all ties with family as he was unable to let her live and let go of her emotionally and mentally. A hundred years later Ryder Diego shows up in the backgarden of Dylan and Theresa dragon heart . Ryder is unaware that she was brought back to life by the powerful creature known as Hallow. Ryder slowly begins to regain her lost memories from her life as Indigo . Ryder and Theresa grow closer and closer until they discover the last secret about Indigo spider dance.
Personlity : Ryder coming back to life has almost no memory of who she actually was instead believing her self to be Ryder Diego a caltheidren refugee at eighteen years old . Ryder has acquired a set of powers that slowly are replaced as she relearn a who she is. Ryder struggles to feel emotions and connect with her peer group this so solely because something inside of her knows she shouldn't be alive and has cut ehr off from her emotions but she slowly regains them. At the bringing Ryder is cold , distant and a shell of a girl. In the middle while still being distant she is closer to the family and talks a lot more at the end of her extended lifespan Ryder is happy and at peace which allows her to go to the afterlife.
As indigo , she loves to make jokes and while she may look vicious she is incredibly friendly. Indigo loves to make others happy. Indigo loves to practice her abilites she loves to impress people and hates to dissapoint them
Apperence : as indigo she as indigo coloured eyes and black silky hair. Her hair is long and reaches her ankles it is curled and she wears a balck spider web vail over her left eye. Her skin is fair white with freckles doted along her cheeks. She wears a black dress with spider web patterns on it and heeled shoes ( the soul community being further advanced than regular humans but not advanced enough for Internet or anything )
As Ryder she has short choppy black hair that reaches her chin . It looks like some hacked it of with a knife. Her eyes are blue but with a small purple tint. Her skin is still place but it looks close to grey she wears a white t-shirt with comical spider logos on it and bell bottom jeans . On her head she wears a spider beanie.
Ryder is unable to explain her attarction to spiders other than she finds them graceful.
Power set.
As indigo she is capable of draining the powers/life source of whoever gets caught in her webbed lining while she can't take any powers for herself she drains their energy replenishing her self.
Wall walking.
Super strength
Danger sense
Flexibility
Charm ( she is able to charm people to do what it is she wants them to do the weaker the will the stronger her control )
Langauge understanding ( capable of learning a language at record breaking speeds )
Spider swarm ( summon spiders )
As Ryder
Super speed.
Langauge understanding
X-Ray vision
Heat control
Invisibility
Phasing.
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Weapon :
As indigo her weapon is a black how decorated with spider engravings that much the arrows.
As Ryder her weapon are a pair of daggers half silver half iron , a mix which destoryed lycanthropes and the Faye but also is effective on really anything. On the hilt is a tiger engraving which was the symbol of Indigos long dead sister.
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As indigo
Favourite food : Rabbit stew
Favorhite colour : black or purple
Favourite animal : a spider
Spirit guide : A tarantula
Spirit partner : a black widow
Favourite music : Soul
Favourite word : Arachnid
Favourite legend : Athena and Arachne.
Favourite county : caltheidreia.
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Dislikes
Least favourite food : beef stew
Least favourite colour : White.
Least favourite animal : A dog
Least favourite spirit guide : a fox
Least favoured spirit partner : A rabbit
Least favourite music : ....
Least favourite word : Joyous
Least favourite legend : el chupacabra ( she actually fought the thing )
Least favourite country : America
As Ryder
Food : Fish and chips
Colour : the same
Favourite animal : the same
Spirit : all the same favourite music : Rock
Faveourite word : the same
Favourite legend : the same
Favourite country : Japan
Least favourites are all of the same except least favourite food is hunters chicken.
Theme song : Bad apple -
Her name is f---ing Indigo Spider Dance. Haha.
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In this world names like that are common.
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No, names like that are NOT common. Not even in a made-up universe/world/whatever. Just stop.
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You don't know this world at all. I can call my characters whatever I want .
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Apologies if that sounded rude.
Indigo isn't set in stone as I don't think it's fitting however I refuse to change spider dance because some strangers online think it's stupid. -
Her name is Indigo Spider Dance and her favourite animal is the spider. Ahaha.
Seriously though, did you actually put any effort into this? It hasn't even been proof read! Look at this s---.
As indigo her weapon is a black how decorated with spider engravings that much the arrows.
Just f---ing look at it. -
Indigos favourite animal was influenced by all of the spider things happening around her.
She went o and got the bow engraved for her fifteenth birthday -
Here, lemme fix that and make it readable for you then, since it took me literally seven minutes to figure out what you're trying to say.
As Indigo, her weapon is a black bow decorated with spider engravings that match the arrows -
Thank you I didn't notice. I have to admit it isn't my best work it was rushed as I wanted to have the rough idea out before I left to go to my brothers football. Thank you for your criticism.
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-Know that something is incomplete and reads like s---
-Post it anyway
You couldn't have written it up, waited until you had the time to complete it, THEN posted it? I mean, s---, in what world is it acceptable to be this lazy? If you handed this to an English teacher she'd smack it straight out of your hands.
Finish your s--- before posting it, for f---s sake.
One day, I swear, I'm going to crack and make a thread of my own just to show you guys how to write a proper character. -
I didn't think about doing that. I don't usually think about long term actions or a solution for later. I was planning to edit the character as I went.
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