Fixing A Heart
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Thread Topic: Fixing A Heart
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Whoa its dark couldnt have guessed
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A/N So guys I won't update often but i'll try! The plot is mine so bye guys!
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Chapter 1 His Only
Voldemort is back, Voldemort is back, Voldemort is back. Those are the only thoughts that can cross the white-blonde, porcelain skined, grey eyed, currently prefect, Draco Lucius Malfoy. As the train to Hogwarts stopped, he ignored Pansies chattering voice that's currently going on about dresses. God that slut was annoying. Why couldn't she go bother someone else! " Hey mate, you coming? asked Draco's best mate, Blaise Zabini. " Yeah," he replied and got of the compartement. He jumped down and smelled the air. It smelled like the pine trees in the forbidden forest, and the good smells coming from Hogwarts. No wonder it's coming from the kitchens. He walked towards a carriage and got in with Pansy, Blaise, Vincent Crabbe, Gregory Goyle, and Daphne Greengrass. He sat down and the carriage lurched forwards. The crunching of the autumn leaves under the wheels reminded him of humans bones being crushed... he shook his head to clear his mind. He already had a plan for this year, he smirked deviously. The carriage stopped and he walked in through the doors and sat down at the Slytherin table. He saw Granger enter the room and sit at the opposite table. Gods was she beautiful. With those chocolate brown eyes, perfectly toned skin, and dark chocolate brown hair, he could almost reach out then and there and kiss her passionately. His eyes soon filled with disgust when Weaslebee sat down next to her and kissed her slopely(sp). His hand twitched and he ached to put his hands on his throat and chock him to death. But alas, not to worry. He would take care of Weaslebee son enough. He smirked as he thought of his plan that he had developed over the summer. A plan to destroy Potter and Tom Riddle so he could name himself king of the world. And he would need a queen and that is where his dearest 'Mione comes in. He'll make her fall in love with him. He chuckled softly thinking about her squirming underneath him begging for more. -
TIME WARP: He's heading toward the library to find weaslebee and Hermione. He walked in and saw Weaslebee sitting across the room. He headed over there and ducked behind a bokshelve when Weasley headed to Hermione to ask her something. He pulled out what looked like fine, white, powder when it was actually deadly poison. He knew Weasley had pimple problems, so he drank a medication to reduce the pimples. As no one was looking, he slipped the poison into the drink. After all we couldn't have Weasley interfering. He hid behind a bookshelve as Weasley headed back to the table. He picked up his drink and drank it. Then he started clutching his throat and fell on his knees. Then Draco appeared abve him with a smirk plasted on his face. Weasleys eyes bugged out of his sockets. Y-You, Weasley stammered. " Yes Weasley, me," he said. Weasley was about to respond when he dropped dead. Hermione was so absorbed in her book she hasn't realized what happened. He smirked and walked away. No one will ever touch his Princess. After all, she's his only.
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A/N Review Review! Tell me what you think and was this a little to rushed? I'm sorry if it was to short. I know it barely included any other people but they will come! ......POST!
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Please read this before posting your next chapters. Thank you, and good luck with your story!
(P.S.: It did feel a bit rushed, but I'm sure you'll get better at the pacing as it progresses. The first chapter's always the hardest.)Moderator -
DISCLAIMER: Do you really need a hint?!?!
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A/N So ok no sexual scenes dang. I'll slow this down a bit. I don't post a lot on this story because it takes a while to get ideas for the next chapter. BTW These chapters will be switching from Dracos POV to Hermiones POV. Like chapter 1 was Draco chapter 2 is Hermione and back and forth. Keep in mind that people that post to tell me how they think about this WILL get responses!
Selena112: Thank you for that non-sexual thing. I really don't want my whole chapter deleted. And I'll try to slow it down. :) -
Chapter 2: Death Hurts
Hermione was down at the quidditch pitch with Harry and Ron. They were practicing quidditch while she, was reading, " Counting the Stars ." How Harry and Ron could stand quidditch, she didn't know. She tryed flying in her first year, fell 30 feet, and never flew again. Harry and Ron, on the other hand, talk about quidditch every day! It got boring. She felt a sudden breeze and almost fell off her seat in fright. " Harry! Don't do that! You could've killed me! she shrieked. " Sorry 'Mione, I can't resist scaring you," he grinned. Ron landed next to Harry. " Hey 'Mione, ready to do that homework you promised you would help me with? " he asked. " Yeah Ron, just give me a few minutes to get down to the library, " she replied. " Alright, " both boys chorused. Ron left, carrying his broom into the locker room with him. Harry followed with his broom in his hand also. She walked down the quidditch stands and into the castle. As she walked the corridors, she saw a flash of white-blond hair go past. Malfoy? She wondered. Is he following me? Why? She shook him out of her mind and continued on to the library. She saw his hair flash past again and stopped. What the hell is going on? She decided to follow him in case he's up to something. She changed courses, and headed down the path he went, careful to not make any noise. She found herself facing a wall. Dead end. But there is a classroom door on her right. She went in, thinking he might be hiding. As she went in, she heard the door shut and lock...
(A/N jk i'm not that evil to leave you
with a major cliffhanger hehe...)
She spun around and saw Malfoy leaning on the door, arms crossed, looking relaxed. " What do you want Malfoy? " she asked timidly. " Your love " he smirked. Was he joking? She thought wildly. He must be, He would never marry a muggle-born! " Let me go Malfoy! " she said. " Tsk tsk, my love, learn your manners. " He replied. -
" You wait until Harry and Ron hear about this! You won't be able to walk and that's the least of your worries! she hissed. His eyes suddenly went dark. Angry dark. " Weaslebee better stay away from you or else, " he hissed through clenched teeth. " Or what? " she asked. He ignored her and unlocked the door and left swiftly. She syood thee stunned. But she quickly got over her shock and left for the library. She arrived just in time and saw Ron sitting at a table. " Hey Ron, " she said. " Hey 'Mione, ready to start? " he greeted. " Yeah let's go, " she replied. " Alright, " he said. They worked in silence, then finally he went over to sit in the cornere in private. She closed her books and went to a beanbag chair and pulled out her book she was reading earlier. After a while, Ron came towards her. " Can you check this 'Mione? " he asked. She nodded and took the paper. She checked it over and said it was fine then handed it back. He left without a word. After 30 minutes she decided to get Ron to go back to the common room. She went over to his chair andgasped, tears filling her eyes. " Ron! " She practically screamed. He was dead. She saw another flash of blond hair. pass by. He killed Ron! she thought while tears streamed down her face. Everything went black after that.
A/N Post and tell me what you think! It might be a bit OOC...
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