Cheshire and yorkshire cat rivalry | pt.1
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Thread Topic: Cheshire and yorkshire cat rivalry | pt.1
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The story will be set out a bit liek roleplay, but is not roleplay.
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Cheshire cat: that blasted cat! Always playing stupid tricks on my cats. I'm sick and tired of it, I need to do something about this problem.
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Yorkshire cat: he he! Another one of my revolutionary plans worked! Another point to me. In your furry face cheshire cat! -
Cheshire cat: I will gather up my army of the best cats from all around britain, then I will defeat yorkshire cat once and for all.
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Yorkshire cat: that stupid cheshire cat and his puny army has no chance against my high end troops. -
(((((((((())))))))))(Oh and please critique when you have the chance(((((((((()))))))))
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How does Yorkshire know what chore is saying? On the belief that chesire is the wonderland chesire and nit the actual place the characters sound like you've just switched them. -
((((((((They don't know what each other are saying, they are just basically assuming what the other cat is thinking/ are planning to do.))))))))
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Cheshire cat: I think it's time I got some rest, since it will be a big day for me tomorrow. I will have to travel all around britain to gather up my wonderful army. I bet that yorkshire cat hasn't even thought about his army yet, this means that I have a higher chance of defeating him since he's unprepared. Ah, great! I can just taste the satisfaction of victory.
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Yorkshire cat: *meows angrily at his servant.* What?! This is absolute tosh! I don't believe one bit of what your saying. Go on, get your furry a$s out of my den. Now!
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