Just a Little Longer
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Thread Topic: Just a Little Longer
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WARNING!: If you don't like stories with no happy ending or with lots of blood then don't read this!
THIS IS A HORROR STORY!
CLAIMR: EVERYTHING IN THIS IS ALL MINE! -
MAIN CHARACTERS:
Dereck: Zac Efron
Kaylee: Demi Lovato
James: Tom Felton
Marie: Meghan Trainor -
Dereck: Dereck is 16 years old and really laid back. When he was 5 he almost got shot with a gun so he's more careful now.
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Dereck's appearance: Black neat hair, pointy chin, ice blue eyes,pale skin, and 6' 2".
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Kaylee: Kaylee has been bullied at a public school since she was 6. She is very shy and doesn't have any frieds.
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Kaylee's appearance: Long hip-length auburn hair, green eyes, dimpled chin, tan skin, and medium height.
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James: His past is great. He's the popular one with no problems.
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James's appearance: Dirty blond hair, dimpled chin, medium skin tone, ice blue eyes, and short.
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When describing a character, you should make sure to go into as much detail as possible. Just describing a few bits and pieces of their appearance isn't going to make them interesting. Include something that'll spark the reader's interest. Do they have piercings? How are their eyes shaped? Do they have any distinguishing marks (scars, etc)? Do they have any tattoos? What kind of tattoo?
You really need to develop your characters more.
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