Minecraft Legends
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Slayerbrine NoviceSummary
Many years ago,babies got sucked into minecraft.Some spawned in an overworld village.Others,who are very special,spawned in a void between dimensions and got shot into them randomly.These babies became brines and weilded special abillities.This is the story of a young man called Slayerbrine.
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Slayerbrine NoviceChapter 1:The Beginging
I woke up and opened my eyes for what it seemed like the first time in my life.I have no knowlege of anything that happened before this.All I knew is that I couldn't stay here but I just laid there abandoned and lonely.It wasn't that I thought I would die it was that I was trying to figure out what happened.My head burned but I could only find out a few thing.What I was to do,How I was to do it and my name was Slayerbrine.
I finnaly got up and took a look at my sorroundings.I was at the edge of a spruce forest and next to a river.Across the river was a vast plain.I decided to go and travel in the plain as it felt right.It was easy to swim across the river and I was at the plain in no time.
In the plain,there wasn't really anything besides some grass,flowers and animals.I was thinking about turning back when I saw a village.I rushed towards it in hopes of finding shelter.When I arrived I saw the village was full of people not villagers.
I explored the village and went into the blacksmith.In the blacksmith there was a chest,which I opened,and in it was 2 iron,shears,1 iron sword,5 apples,6 sapplings.The blacksmith came in and asked"You are a traveller right?"and I nodded"Good,you may keep those to remember this village".I bolted out of the village in an instant.I was travelling back to my spawn point and sheared all the sheep I found on the way.
I made it back and almost instantly I started chopping down the spruce trees.After finishing one I made a crafting table and a set of wooden tools.I cleared a wide area before starting to make my house.I used alot of these blocks called carpenters' block to make it and I was a 2 story,20x20 house.I crafted a carpenters' bed,some chests and decorations to fill my house.Night came and I slept. -
(Hey buddy; we are buddies, yes? I don't want to be the one to burst your bubble, but you can't copyright fan-fiction.
See, the problem comes from the fact that you're writing about something that's ALREADY BEEN COPYRIGHTED. Minecraft belongs to Mojang and is their copyright. Technically, what you're doing is illegal, it just that no one cares enough to actually contest it. And even if you did simply remove the word Minecraft from your story, it would still clearly be taking place in Minecraft and therefore be subject to copyright infringement.
Don't let that stop you from finishing the story though, you gotta write for the fun of it.
Also, you really need to stop making these threads. I'm tired of reading the same opening over and over again. I want to see an actual plot, you know? With a villain, and a challenge and a long journey? A hero's journey? Instead of just watching your character dick around and do literally nothing.
Here's some advice, if a scene doesn't advance the plot, don't have the scene, idiot.
Also, if you're lost in the wild, the best advice is to follow the river. Historically, that's your best bet for finding other people.)
Chapter 1:The Beginning
I woke up and opened my eyes for what seemed like the first time in my life. I have no knowledge of anything that happened before this. All I knew is that I couldn't stay here but I just laid there abandoned and lonely. It wasn't that I thought I would die; it was that I was trying to figure out what happened. My head burned but I could only remember a few thing. What I was supposed to do, how I was to do it and my name: Slayerbrine.
I finally got up and took a look at my surroundings. I was at the edge of a spruce forest and next to a river. Across the river was a vast plain. I decided to go and travel in the plain as it felt right. It was easy to swim across the river and I was at the plain in no time.
In the plain,there wasn't really anything besides some grass,flowers and animals. I was thinking about turning back when I saw a village. I rushed towards it in hopes of finding shelter. When I arrived I saw the village was full of people not villagers. (??? aren't people villagers? Explain.)
I explored the village and went into the blacksmith. In the blacksmith there was a chest, which I opened, and in it was two iron bars, some shears, one iron sword, five apples, and six saplings. The blacksmith came in and asked "You are a traveler, right?"and I nodded.
"Good, you may keep those to remember this village". I bolted out of the village in an instant. I was travelling back to my spawn point and sheared all the sheep I found on the way.
I made it back and almost instantly I started chopping down the spruce trees. After finishing one I made a crafting table and a set of wooden tools. I cleared a wide area before starting to make my house. I used a lot of these blocks called carpenter's block to make it and it was a two story, 20x20 house. I crafted a carpenter's bed, (???) some chests and some decorations to fill my house. Night came and I slept. -
animefairy18 Newbiehey slayer can you critique one my characters ? just posted the thread called characters
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