Critique
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Thread Topic: Critique
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Demons on ladders in the night,
Causing a very big fright.
Life doesn't frighten me at all.
When Justin Beiber tries to sing,
It makes my ears bleed and ring.
Life doesn't frighten me at all
Nightmares that make you scream.
Death giving you bad dreams.
They dont frighten me at all.
Having severe depression.
Then people starting obsessions.
That doesn't frighten me At all.
I go boo
Make them shoo
I make fun
Way they run
I wont cry
So they fly
I just smile
They go wild
Life doesn't frighten me at all.
Popularity makes me shiver,
So does drowning in a river.
Life doesn't frighten me At all.
Climbing big heights.
Dancing every night.
No, they dont frighten me at all.
Sleeping in deadly places.
Blood covered faces.
They dont frighten me at all.
Dont show me ladders and spiders
And listen for my screams.
If I'm gonna be afraid,
Its only in the land of dreams.
I've got a magic wand
That I keep In a bottle.
I can stalk in the shadows,
And never go in full throttle.
Life doesn't frighten me at all.
Not at all,
Not at all.
Life doesn't frighten me at all. -
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