Maddie's Story Thread
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Here you go, Maddie.
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Thanks Jeeshan, it's great.
So, peeps this is where I'll put my stories from now on. -
Note: the stories that I write and post on here are completely made up from my imagination, I am not intending to copy currently existing stories by real authors. If there is any content in this story that is similar to that of a book, it is pure coincidence.
This story also contains mature words/events, so if you don't like that kind of stuff, I suggest you don't read it. The age ranges for my stories are probably around 13+
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SECRETS[/B]
Book One.
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Chapter One ~ The first time ~
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Kayla sat up and groaned. "No, no no! How could this be happening, really I thought things would go well, but this just so turns out to be absolute s---!" She cursed under her breath, Kayla ran hurried into her room and slammed the door shut behind her, then climbed into her bed, sighing as she did so. "Oh, why do things have to be like this?" She asked herself, obviously not expecting an answer. She wasn't that stupid.
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The sun streamed in through the gap in the curtains, the sky was a brilliant azure. Alissa was curled up on her bedroom floor, although she was completely unaware of that fact. Unfortunately it was a school day today, and if she didn't wake up soon, then of course she would be in deep trouble with her teachers, for being late AGAIN.
Her alarm clock finally woke Alissa up with a jolt. "Oh my f---ing god, I'm going to be late again." Alissa groaned, she headed over to her chair by her dressing table, and grabbed the fresh clothes that were piled on there. Hurriedly, Alissa got dressed and brushed her hair until it shone in the sunlight, turning it from brown to a pale gold. She then hurried down at and grabbed a slice of bread and flung it in the toaster. A couple of minutes later, the bread - now toast, popped up and out of the toaster. Alissa dropped it hurriedly onto a plate, then spread some butter on it. Jesus was she hungry.
The chilly winter air snapped at Alissa as she walked along to school. She hadbeen willing for winter to end soon, but it just wwouldn't go away. Careless, she shrugged as she thought about the fact that she was probably going to get a real head banging from her teacher for being late. That was strange, earlier, she had been so worried about not being on time, but now, Alissa didn't even give a f---. -
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(Wow... That part didn't go well :-/
Oh well, let's just carry on with my story now. Just bear with me peeps while I try and dig up my writing skills from a couple of years ago, bearing in mind I haven't written a proper story for some time. @#%% this) -
Carrying on from where I left off on my s---ty story xD)))))
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Alissa soon arrived at the school gates, right there on the spot, she suddenly realized that this was the first day of a new term. That this was the first day back after two short, pathetic weeks. Reality hit her with a big blow: she had to go back to school after the holidays, it was a new f---ing term, and she just remembered that there were a few certain people at her school who made her life ten times more s---ty than it already is. Wow. Just f---ing great. [I] She thought.
Alissa shrugged, and reluctantly headed through the gates and onto the school grounds. "Brace yourself Alissa Jones, for what's going to happen next isn't going to be pretty." She muttered to herself.
Suddenly, something made her look up, maybe it was just pure instinct that told her to acknowledge what was going to happen, or who was there, in front of her.
"Oh, it isn't Alissa Jones, herself, eh." Someone giggled. The voice sounded vaguely familiar, but Alissa coulin't figure out who exactly it was. She forced herself to face reality, and just - for goodness sake - look up.
Ok. Here goes nothing. She looked ahead, and all of a sudden, she realized it, it just dawned upon her that the person who had just spoken, was Hannah Taylor - The one who had made Alissa's life a s---hole.
"Just f--- off and leave me alone, you whore." Alissa threatened.
"Aww diddums, did I just upset you? Aww I'm terribly sorry." Hannah giggled sarcastically. Alissa totally knew that the girl was being sarcastic.
"I don't get why I never decided to ignore you in the first place," Alissa shook her head and frowned. "Maybe it was because I'm so stupid, huh?"
Hannah forced herself to hold back a giggle, she was enjoying this so much, seeing her enemy melt down right in front of her very eyes. "Oh yes, you are extremely stupid. I can't even believe how you managed to wheedle your way into this school, since it is for high education anyway." She tutted.
"Honestly, I don't care what you think about me anymore, your presence kills my braincells." Alissa rolled her eyes, "anyway, I plan not to waste any of my precious time, with [I]you, the one who has made my life a s--- hole." Alissa stormed off, before Hannah could say anything else that wasn't worth saying.
Honestly, she is wasting her breath by saying these time wasting snidy remarks about me. Alissa thought to herself. Not like I care anyway. -
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Why is it all in italics???) -
Just need to edit that one)
Alissa soon arrived at the school gates, right there on the spot, she suddenly realized that this was the first day of a new term. That this was the first day back after two short, pathetic weeks. Reality hit her with a big blow: she had to go back to school after the holidays, it was a new f---ing term, and she just remembered that there were a few certain people at her school who made her life ten times more s---ty than it already is.Wow. Just f---ing great. [I] She thought.
Alissa shrugged, and reluctantly headed through the gates and onto the school grounds. "Brace yourself Alissa Jones, for what's going to happen next isn't going to be pretty." She muttered to herself.
Suddenly, something made her look up, maybe it was just pure instinct that told her to acknowledge what was going to happen, or who was there, in front of her.
"Oh, if it isn't Alissa Jones, herself, eh." Someone giggled. The voice sounded vaguely familiar, but Alissa couldn't figure out who exactly it was. She forced herself to face reality, and just - for goodness sake - look up.
Ok. Here goes nothing. She looked ahead, and all of a sudden, she realized it, it just dawned upon her that the person who had just spoken, was Hannah Taylor - The one who had made Alissa's life a s---hole.
"Just f--- off and leave me alone, you whore." Alissa threatened.
"Aww diddums, did I just upset you? Aww I'm terribly sorry." Hannah giggled sarcastically. Alissa totally knew that the girl was being sarcastic.
"I don't get why I never decided to ignore you in the first place," Alissa shook her head and frowned. "Maybe it was because I'm so stupid, huh?"
Hannah forced herself to hold back a giggle, she was enjoying this so much, seeing her enemy melt down right in front of her very eyes. "Oh yes, you are extremely stupid. I can't even believe how you managed to wheedle your way into this school, since it is for high education anyway." She tutted.
"Honestly, I don't care what you think about me anymore, your presence kills my braincells." Alissa rolled her eyes, "anyway, I plan not to waste any of my precious time, with [I]you, the one who has made my life a s--- hole." Alissa stormed off, before Hannah could say anything else that wasn't worth saying.
Honestly, she is wasting her breath by saying these time wasting snidy remarks about me.Alissa thought to herself.Not like I care anyway.
2016-01-30 05:59:54 -
SECRETS
Book One.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter One ~ The first time ~
_____________________________________________
Kayla sat up and groaned. "No, no no! How could this be happening, really I thought things would go well, but this just so turns out to be absolute s---!" She cursed under her breath, Kayla ran hurried into her room and slammed the door shut behind her, then climbed into her bed, sighing as she did so. "Oh, why do things have to be like this?" She asked herself, obviously not expecting an answer. She wasn't that stupid.
~
The sun streamed in through the gap in the curtains, the sky was a brilliant azure. Alissa was curled up on her bedroom floor, although she was completely unaware of that fact. Unfortunately it was a school day today, and if she didn't wake up soon, then of course she would be in deep trouble with her teachers, for being late AGAIN.
Her alarm clock finally woke Alissa up with a jolt. "Oh my f---ing god, I'm going to be late again." Alissa groaned, she headed over to her chair by her dressing table, and grabbed the fresh clothes that were piled on there. Hurriedly, Alissa got dressed and brushed her hair until it shone in the sunlight, turning it from brown to a pale gold. She then hurried down at and grabbed a slice of bread and flung it in the toaster. A couple of minutes later, the bread - now toast, popped up and out of the toaster. Alissa dropped it hurriedly onto a plate, then spread some butter on it. Jesus was she hungry.
The chilly winter air snapped at Alissa as she walked along to school. She hadbeen willing for winter to end soon, but it just wwouldn't go away. Careless, she shrugged as she thought about the fact that she was probably going to get a real head banging from her teacher for being late. That was strange, earlier, she had been so worried about not being on time, but now, Alissa didn't even give a f---.
Alissa soon arrived at the school gates, right there on the spot, she suddenly realized that this was the first day of a new term. That this was the first day back after two short, pathetic weeks. Reality hit her with a big blow: she had to go back to school after the holidays, it was a new f---ing term, and she just remembered that there were a few certain people at her school who made her life ten times more s---ty than it already is.Wow. Just f---ing great. [I] She thought.
Alissa shrugged, and reluctantly headed through the gates and onto the school grounds. "Brace yourself Alissa Jones, for what's going to happen next isn't going to be pretty." She muttered to herself.
Suddenly, something made her look up, maybe it was just pure instinct that told her to acknowledge what was going to happen, or who was there, in front of her.
"Oh, if it isn't Alissa Jones, herself, eh." Someone giggled. The voice sounded vaguely familiar, bucouldn't coulin't figure out who exactly it was. She forced herself to face reality, and just - for goodness sake - look up.
Ok. Here goes nothing. She looked ahead, and all of a sudden, she realized it, it just dawned upon her that the person who had just spoken, was Hannah Taylor - The one who had made Alissa's life a s---hole.
"Just f--- off and leave me alone, you whore." Alissa threatened.
"Aww diddums, did I just upset you? Aww I'm terribly sorry." Hannah giggled sarcastically. Alissa totally knew that the girl was being sarcastic.
"I don't get why I never decided to ignore you in the first place," Alissa shook her head and frowned. "Maybe it was because I'm so stupid, huh?"
Hannah forced herself to hold back a giggle, she was enjoying this so much, seeing her enemy melt down right in front of her very eyes. "Oh yes, you are extremely stupid. I can't even believe how you managed to wheedle your way into this school, since it is for high education anyway." She tutted.
"Honestly, I don't care what you think about me anymore, your presence kills my braincells." Alissa rolled her eyes, "anyway, I plan not to waste any of my precious time, with [I]you, the one who has made my life a s--- hole." Alissa stormed off, before Hannah could say anything else that wasn't worth saying.
Honestly, she is wasting her breath by saying these time wasting snidy remarks about me.Alissa thought to herself.Not like I care anyway.
2016-01-30 05:59:54 -
SECRETS
Book One.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter One ~ The first time ~
_____________________________________________
Kayla sat up and groaned. "No, no no! How could this be happening, really I thought things would go well, but this just so turns out to be absolute s---!" She cursed under her breath, Kayla ran hurried into her room and slammed the door shut behind her, then climbed into her bed, sighing as she did so. "Oh, why do things have to be like this?" She asked herself, obviously not expecting an answer. She wasn't that stupid.
~
The sun streamed in through the gap in the curtains, the sky was a brilliant azure. Alissa was curled up on her bedroom floor, although she was completely unaware of that fact. Unfortunately it was a school day today, and if she didn't wake up soon, then of course she would be in deep trouble with her teachers, for being late AGAIN.
Her alarm clock finally woke Alissa up with a jolt. "Oh my f---ing god, I'm going to be late again." Alissa groaned, she headed over to her dressing table, and grabbed the fresh clothes that were piled on there. Hurriedly, Alissa got dressed and brushed her hair until it shone in the sunlight, turning it from brown to a pale gold. She then hurried down at and grabbed a slice of bread and flung it in the toaster. A couple of minutes later, the bread - now toast, popped up and out of the toaster. Alissa dropped it hurriedly onto a plate, then spread some butter on it. Jesus was she hungry.
The chilly winter air snapped at Alissa as she walked along to school. She hadbeen willing for winter to end soon, but it just wwouldn't go away. Careless, she shrugged as she thought about the fact that she was probably going to get a real head banging from her teacher for being late. That was strange, earlier, she had been so worried about not being on time, but now, Alissa didn't even give a f---.
Alissa soon arrived at the school gates, right there on the spot, she suddenly realized that this was the first day of a new term. That this was the first day back after two short, pathetic weeks. Reality hit her with a big blow: she had to go back to school after the holidays, it was a new f---ing term, and she just remembered that there were a few certain people at her school who made her life ten times more s---ty than it already is.Wow. Just f---ing great. [I] She thought.
Alissa shrugged, and reluctantly headed through the gates and onto the school grounds. "Brace yourself Alissa Jones, for what's going to happen next isn't going to be pretty." She muttered to herself.
Suddenly, something made her look up, maybe it was just pure instinct that told her to acknowledge what was going to happen, or who was there, in front of her.
"Oh, if it isn't Alissa Jones, herself, eh." Someone giggled. The voice sounded vaguely familiar, bucouldn't coulin't figure out who exactly it was. She forced herself to face reality, and just - for goodness sake - look up.
Ok. Here goes nothing. She looked ahead, and all of a sudden, she realized it, it just dawned upon her that the person who had just spoken, was Hannah Taylor - The one who had made Alissa's life a s---hole.
"Just f--- off and leave me alone, you whore." Alissa threatened.
"Aww diddums, did I just upset you? Aww I'm terribly sorry." Hannah giggled sarcastically. Alissa totally knew that the girl was being sarcastic.
"I don't get why I never decided to ignore you in the first place," Alissa shook her head and frowned. "Maybe it was because I'm so stupid, huh?"
Hannah forced herself to hold back a giggle, she was enjoying this so much, seeing her enemy melt down right in front of her very eyes. "Oh yes, you are extremely stupid. I can't even believe how you managed to wheedle your way into this school, since it is for high education anyway." She tutted.
"Honestly, I don't care what you think about me anymore, your presence kills my braincells." Alissa rolled her eyes, "anyway, I plan not to waste any of my precious time, with [I]you, the one who has made my life a s--- hole." Alissa stormed off, before Hannah could say anything else that wasn't worth saying.
Honestly, she is wasting her breath by saying these time wasting snidy remarks about me. Alissa thought to herself. Not like I care anyway.
Later, Alissa was sitting in maths class, waiting for the school day to finally end, but time was crawling by like a snail. She sighed, then put her pencil down on the desk. Quietly, she sneaked out of the classroom and hurried down the hallway to the girl's bathroom. She carefully pushed the door open, then went inside and locked herself in one of the cubicles. Alissa grabbed her phone from her bag, and turned it on. The familiar 'welcome' screen flashed up on her phone, next, Alissa clicked on her contacts list and scrolled through it until she found her mum's number. "Great." She whispered. Alissa cautiously hovered her finger over the 'call' button for a few seconds, contemplating whether or not to actually call her mum to pick her up from school. She sighed, then leant against the back of the door. "I don't know... I don't know if I should..." She trailed off, muttering to herself.
Alissa finally made up her mind and turned the phone off. There was no use in calling her mum because it would be too risky anyway, her mum would want avalid reason from Alissa to pick her up. She sighed, then slipped her phone back into her bag, then unlocked the door. She was about to leave the bathroom, when she heard a sound behind her. Is was a familiar sound, one that she had heard before, but she just didn't know what situation it was.
"Who's there?" She demanded. It was probably just a drip of water coming from one of the taps, but Alissa wasn't so sure of that. -
Oh and please critique on my stories :3)
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/ I'll do chapter 2 later/
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Oh f--- that, I'll do it now)
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Wait, I need to write out the descriptions for the characters in the story.)
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