Short Warrior Cat Story I Made Up
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Thread Topic: Short Warrior Cat Story I Made Up
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Warrior Cats: Dawn Rising
Prologue
The rain lashed down like small pellets coming from the sky, the thunder crashed around up above in the dark, menacing storm clouds. The two cats prowled through the forest, their fur illuminated by the frequent flashes of lightning. One of the cats was a pale ginger tom, who had a ragged torn ear from the battle ground. Whilst, the other cat, which was much more well groomed than the first cat, was a sleek black and white she-cat. She looked as if she was a kittypet, a cat who was well fed by its twoleg owners, but actually, she was a forest cat. She had been nowhere near twolegs.
The two cats headed for a small cave that was shielded by a clump of bracken. The black and white cat seemed to move faster than the tom, maybe she was younger than him, or she just wanted to arrive at the cave first.
She led the way up until both of them reached the cave entrance. It was one, big gapoing hole that looked as if it was about to swallow any cat who dared enter the dark cave.
They slowed down when they arrived at the entrance it was as if something had deliberately slowed them down. Or maybe there was just something about the cave that was eerie, and no warrior cat, even the brave, had dared to set paw into the forbidden cave.
With little hesitation, together, both cats entered the cave, padding slowly along the hard, muddy ground, until they were fully cloaked in darkness... -
Please critique on my story so far.
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I honestly love it
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Thank you momma.
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