Can I have some constructive criticism?

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Thread Topic: Can I have some constructive criticism?

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  Girl_Almighty Junior

  9 years ago
  Please read it. I wrote it, and I'd really appreciate if you'd give me some constructive criticism.
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  Girl_Almighty Junior

  9 years ago
  With the help of Madison, I editied and came up with this.

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