my literary notebook.
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Thread Topic: my literary notebook.
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Death and sorrow so weak and bare,
Tis like aether, numb to the snare
Roly the sweet, yet sour dough,
Churning ashes silent, low
No more! Death has had its last rimiss,
I shall fill each cup with an golden bliss
That removes each gravestone,
That severs life abundant
This is what he has shown,
My heart, so arrogant,
and killed the strife
if I might give life, -
Now, and now always, whatever may fall,
still be my vision oh ruler of all. -
This is something that I just thought up so it probably sucks.
Green the man who remove the sheath,
To steal ones soul in angered greed,
Jewels one barrer mischief for the haughty,
If a man steals the soul in anxious grief. -
BabyChocolate NewbieNone of them suck there actually really good keep it up XD
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Thanks for the encouragement,
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Silence, this stillness within my soul,
calmity bearing good tidings,
my last remiss hath taken it's toll,
That bears the reason for this writing,
One silent thought sparked,
thus charging this instant,
tis the reason for my poetic arithmetic,
I hope you see beyond
this crafty and artistic line,
realize that you were always the one,
I shall never forget you,
Beaugh. -
Very creative the words create a picture in my head thanks for making them :)
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Cause my anguish,
Stand in my pain,
Your haughty fists,
haven't done there worse,
Tho master in my dismay,
will help lead the way,
to my freedom,
pain is sometimes the only way,
like a child to the rod,
chasten me now,
kill my strife,
grant me freedom,
my final remorse.
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