S_E_'s notebook
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Thread Topic: S_E_'s notebook
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So, I don't know about you, but I always have notbooks and sketchbooks handy. This thread will be my digital library.
Rules:
1.You may read any story or poem you like.
2.You may not post your own stories or poems.
3.You may respond if I ask for feedback.
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Two of a kind
Althea sat at the kitchen table. Her mom sighed.
"So, Alexia-"
"Who?" She asked. "Wait, wasn't she my imaginary friend?"
"No," her mother said. "And how could you forget you're own sister?" That was the last thing Althea heard before she blacked out.
*time skip*
"So, she's..." Althea couldn't bring herself to say it.
"Yes." The man said. "And we need you to help us er... cover it up. The country can't know. From now until further notice, you are Alexia Jones." -
Awesome idea)
Mary Sue
Some people will tell Mrs. Jones that naming her daughter Mary Sue was a huge mistake. But nobody could deny: those beautiful golden ringlets, those sky blue eyes, that smile- she was simply, utterly, unquestionably perfect. Mary Sue was kind, and with only a smile could make friends. As a child she competed in beauty pageants, and gave all the prize money to the other contestants. She was smart too. A genius! She tutored all of her classmates when they had trouble in school. She played every instrument, and sang beautfully! You would think a girl so perfect would be mean, and lazy, but no! Mary Sue loved everyone and everything, and even played soccer, basketball, softball, volleyball, feild hockey, and lacross! She was amazing! Until one day in eighth grade...
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Mary Sue
One day Mary Sue was walking through the hallway. She waved to all of her friends(everyone), and smiled to everyone. But then, another girl stood in the middle of the hallway. "Hi, I'm Mary Sue!" Mary Sue's voice was bubbly and sing-song. The girl didn't smile when Mary Sue did. "I'm Maryanne Susanna," She said. "And I beleive that you're blocking my way." The girl pushed past, and people in the hallway saw something they'd never seen before. Somebody didn't smile around Mary Sue. And Mary Sue was frowning.
At lunch time, Mary Sue was already smiling(she couldn't step into class without smiling). She held her lunchbox as she skipped over to her closest friends, Gary Stew and Belinda. "I have something I've never had before." Belinda giggled. "Anything below an A+?" Mary Sue shook her head. "No, the new girl- Maryanne Susanna. She doesn't like me." Belinda and Gary Stew gasped! "But you're perfect, sweetheart..." Gary said. -
Mary Sue bounced her hair. "I know, but she still doesn-" Maryanne Susanna sat beside Belinda. "Hi guys! I'm Maryanne Susanna! But you can call me Maryanne!" Maryanne smiled, and bounced her dirty blonde curls. "I'm Gary Stew, you can call me Gary." Gary said, smiling. He stopped holding Mary Sue and shook Maryanne's hand. Gary also had blonde hair and blue eyes, and a perfect smile. He and Mary Sue were too perfect for anyone but eachother. "Belinda." Belinda said, adjusting her glasses. Maryanne smiled. "Love your glasses! So, my family just moved here from Cali. Would you guys mind showing me around town?" Before Mary Sue could say they already had plans, Gary said, "Sure, I've got nothing to do later." Mary Sue was stunned. Gary had never blown off a date! For once, Mary Sue felt an odd feeling. Was she jealouse? She knew Belinda would comfort her, but then Belinda said: "Yeah, sounds like fun! Are you coming, Mary Sue?" Mary Sue shook her head. "I don't feel so good..."
Nobody talks to me anymore, what do I do?" Mary Sue's parents stared blankly. "I don't know honey, this girl sounds perfectly nice," Her dad said. "Maybe you just need to get over yurself and realize the world doesn't revolve around you." Mary Sue was shocked. Nobody had ever spoken to her like that before. "Yes, you have been acting rather stuck up lately," Her mom added. Mary Sue had never felt so betrayed! Nowadays, she had to compete just for her boyfriend's attention! Maryanne Susanna had taken the whole school from Mary Sue. The teachers called on Maryanne. Maryanne was the star player, and Mary Sue was kicked off the team!
Maryanne took Mary Sue's place in all music programs! One day, Mary Sue had tried to talk to Maryanne about how upset she was, and everyone freaked out! "Not cool," Gary said. "You know what, what did I ever see in you?" Had Mary Sue just been dumped? Then, Maryanne stepped in. "That's all you are," She whispered. "A pretty face." Was that true? -
Hey can I get feedback so far?)
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Yeah, I'm stuck in a rut for Mary Sue.)
You couldn't tell that we were sisters. Twins. Her face was round and adorable. Mine was more narrow, with acute features. I looked more like my aunt then I did my mom. She didn't look like mom either. My aunt was beautiful, the beauty striked fear. Mom and my sister's beauty envoked happiness. She was blond. My hair was jet-black like mom's. Mom was a model. They all knew she would be too. My aunt was trouble. They all knew I would be too. -
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