A preview of a thing I want to write.
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Thread Topic: A preview of a thing I want to write.
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On one surprisingly warm winter day, a mysterious figure clothed in black appeared in front of a local high school, causing some students nearby to stare. With not a word, he proceeded to open the main doors and walked inside the school, showing a photo of a student whom he was searching for. After roaming the halls and asking everyone he saw, he came to a certain class room on the fourth floor, and, glancing inside, he saw whom he had been looking for. "I've found you, geek.." He whispered under his breath, before quickly leaving the premises.
"Okay guys, here are your assignments for the day." In room 403, the teacher wrote the names of two assignments on the smartboard, and turned back to the class. "These must be done by the end of the day. The netbooks and tablets are in the back, and you must use Microsoft Word for the first part." The teacher then sat back in her desk, returning to grading tests. A young man that sat in the front of the room nodded and went to get a tablet, stopping to catch only a glimpse of a person covered in black. "Who the..?" The person muttered something before disappearing from sight, leaving the young man staring at the spot. "Is something wrong, Micheal?" The teacher asked, noticing that he was just standing there. "Thought I saw something is all." Micheal said, before returning to his seat. "How peculiar. Must have been a new student or something."
The final bell rang a few hours later, and most of the students began leaving the school. Just as Micheal walked out the doors, the figure from earlier stomped in front of him. "I've got you now, stay where you are." He said, before Micheal's brother, Brandan, walked out the school building. "What's going on?" Brandan said, raising an eyebrow. Before another word could be spoken, the figure's right arm flashed a crimson red, and he ran over to Micheal. "Ictolo von transperr!" He placed his hand on Micheal's head, and a flash of red light consumed the area. Micheal's vision blurred, before he blacked out. "Say hello to your family for me, geek." The figure said, removing his hood. Dark Mike's face was grinning, showing sharp, white teeth. "While you're at it, wish your girlfriend luck, as well." Dark Mike's laughter echoed before silence fell over the area. -
Nature NoviceYeah, i think.... It's good. Feel like I'm the one who is in the story.
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Thanks. And no, that's actually me and an evil version of myself.
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Nature NoviceOkay, I mean is, I feel like I'm one of the characters in the story, like I'm the player.
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Oh, I get what you're saying, then.
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