A Lucky Soul
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Thread Topic: A Lucky Soul
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Nature NoviceI woke up, and greeted by the same darkness. I looked to the window, and it was night time. "Hello." A soft stallion(man) voice said. I looked to where the sound came from. I saw a shadowy figure, but I could still see his color. He has a brown coat, dark blue mane, his cutie mark is a injection pen and his wings rested on his side. My fear came true. He was my father. "Dad? What are you doing here?" I asked. "Nothing important, just visiting my child here." "Oh." The only reply came out from my mouth. We watched each other for seconds. "Anyways, I have to go back to home. Take care here okay?" "Okay dad." I replied. He went out. I noticed another pony came in from the door. This time, he has a white coat, blue mane, a cutie mark of symbol of love (just line) and a horn stood proudly on his head. "Sir?!" "Shh... Calm down, it's okay." "B-but y-you a-are-e h-here-e!" He walked to my bedside-while I'm still tucked there-and gently stroked my purple mane with his hoof. My body was shaking in fear as I'm afraid that the stroking could be a strike against me. My second fear came true. He removed his hoof from my mane and immedialy slapped me on the right cheek. "Ouch." I put and rubbed my cheek using one of my hoof. "I AM TRULY DISSAPOINTED IN YOU!!" He screamed against my ear, but I know, he would put his volume down, not to break my ears. "How come? How come you could do such a thing? Twice? Why didn't you tell me about your feeling?? Again, I'm dissapointed in you." He expressed his feeling towards me. I kept my mouth shut, as I don't want to cause any more trouble. He charged up his horn and.....
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