my story
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My occ's
Name: draconia
Age: 17
Gender: female
Race: vampire pony!
Looks: snow white fur. Golden red eyes. Long wavy silver mane and tail. Silvery dragon wings. Small for her age but is thin and has long legs
Cutimark: a gold dragon with a black collar with a wip over is head.
Job: dragon tamer.
Likes: being alone. Dragon blood. Stars.
Dislikes: crowds. Pony blood (tastes funny) and water
Home: shes a nomad
Name: ancient dune
Age- unknown
Gender: male
Race: aliacorn.
Looks: sandy fur. Amithist eyes. Large wings with white markings. Tall. His horn is slightly curved back. He is covered in scars and missing an eye.
Cutimark: doesnt know what it is because its covered with a scar, like someone tryed to erase it.
Job: he doesnt know
Likes: sand. The sun. Daytime
Dislikes: fire. Nighttime. And not knowing his past
Other: has amnesia -
Ancient dune POV-
I was running. I don't know why i was, only that i needed to. I could see pine trees brushing past me in a blur. All that i could hear was my hoof beats on the ground. My left wing was hanging limp, having been hit by a blast of magic from one of the unicorns that where chasing me. I glance over my shoulder and sigh, relising that my followers had given up for now. I start to slow down but i don't stop. I look around to see where i was but, unsuprisingly, i don't recognise the area. Something roars and i stop in fright.
Draconia POV-
I grin as i fly around a young dragon, laughing at it. The dragon roars and lashes out with its tail but i dive, the limb sailing harmlessly overhead. The dragon stomps and breaths fire at me and i spin out of the way with a smirk, my fangs glinting. "Hey pea brain! I'm over here!" I shout, angering the dragon ferther -
So how's that so far?
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I like it. Continue :)
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Ancient dune POV-
My ears go back as i watch a blast of fire light up the sky "hey pea brain! Im over here!" A female voice shouted, making the dragon roar again in anger. I started running to see who it is and to lend a hoof if they need it. I stop at the edge of a clearing and my jaw drops at the sight before me.
Draconia POV-
I hover over the dragon as i pull a chain out of my back, with a hook on the end. I dive and throw the hook at the dragons foot, catching it on the dumb lizards claws. I start flying aroundythe dragon, wrapping it in the chain. The dragon screamed in anger and struggled to free itself before it fell to the ground. I smirked and land by it "I win." -
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Mary Sue alert.
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Whats a mary sue?
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