my poems...
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Thread Topic: my poems...
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Story of your life...
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Hehe~
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Boy, I have to write handwriting.
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And I still have two questions left in English.
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Oops, wrong thread, wrong forum.
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When You Are Deep Alone in the Void
When you wish you could move time
Wishing to wait and see that someday you will be fine
Seeing all the good things in with you
Wishing to be beautiful like a sunset view
Trying to be evergreen like a tree
Moving around like an ambiguous bee
Who is waiting for the perfect blossom to glee
When you're deep alone in the void
All you get is ignorance and avoid
When you're cold in the emptiness
And you look around to see a speck of happiness
You look at people fresh as a raindrop
And you look at yourself an unhealthy food crop
You suffer the loss of losing someone
Someone who could replace everyone
You stare at the dark cloudy sky
Wishing all your sadness could fly
Like the birds who rush to go home
But then you look down and see you're alone
When you're deep alone in the void and you wish
You could slap back the people who've hurt you
The ones who finally showed their colours which were true
Deep alone in the void
You're so cold and quiet
Waiting to see the silver lining on the cloud
You have no more energy left to shout aloud
You simply close your eyes and choose to wait
Waiting to see if you're not alone and if you have some mate
Deep alone in the void it's all white and you're that tiny little black spot
Waiting for yourself to rot
And to die and what not
Wishing to see if there is some hope
Somehow if the pain lessens to cope. -
I like your poems :)
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Thanks :)
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Your poems are nice,
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No probs. If it's possible, please could you maybe have the chance to critique on my stories, its the thread called Misty's Writing And Stuff.
I would be very grateful if you do. ;) thanks -
Your welcome Misty
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Thanks :)
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KELLY BHATTA NovicePercy Sam and Alexander..hw r ew?
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I'm sick.
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KELLY BHATTA NoviceM dead
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