A love story
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Thread Topic: A love story
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*sad epic music playing in the background*
It was a dark and stormy night in September. The funeral was being held in a cemetery everyone dressed in black and crying...mourning for the dead one. I cried more than anyone else was...for he was my best friend. Everyone tried comforting me but nothing worked...only made me feel worse. To get away from them all I ran, pointlessly, but I ran as fast as I could. In the distance I saw the tree of all our childhood memories. I ran to the tree and weep evenmore -
nice sm i like the story
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lol im just making it up as i go
Holding onto the tree I weep...but then I hear a familiar voice. I thought: who could it be? I look around,still with tears in my eyes, and see nothing then I hear it again. This time I was sure I heard something that sounded like Eddie...But, how could it be him if he's dead? I dunt believe in ghosts so I know that's not what it is. I here it again. "Ugh I know I'm not going crazy" I mutter. -
I cry more yelling "Eddie, *sniff* I miss you! You were the only one who could comfort me, make me laugh and make me feel special. I love only you. I know you can't hear me. I should have told you when you were still alive. But now it's too late..."
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As I cry I hear someone walking with the leaves crumbling beneath their feet. 'Who is it?' I wonder. I hear the sound getting closer, I hold my breath as to not let them hear me. I see a tall figure walking by. 'Let me get a closer look.' For being so nosy I fall over on the slippery dead grass. The figure turns to me, looks at me with the bluest, most beautiful eyes, just...staring. I look up a bit to see his face. But as I move he pulls something out of his pocket. I gasp, he pulled out a gun and is looking right at me. "Please dunt shoot!" I beg him. His expression softens. "Bryana?" he says. "H-how do you know m-my name?" I ask with a worried expression on my face. He kneels down to where I am and asks, "You don't remember me?" "W-well am I supposed to?" "Well I was hoping you would because I had told you I love you but you said you love Eddie." I gasp,"Austin?!?!" "The one and only." he says flashing a weak smile.
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"I haven't seen you in forever..." "Well I have been busy with everything..." "Everything like what?" I ask. He chuckles and says,"Well you know just stuff, like thinking about you, how to get Eddie out of the way so I could get to you..." his voice trails off like he was now just talking to himself. "Wait" he stops talking and I ask "You were trying to get Eddie out of the way for what? To kill me to to,to get to me for what?" "Well I guess it's about time you knew...I was the one that killed Eddie...I just couldn't stand seeing you two together. He would always come bragging to me saying he had you and I didn't and...sometimes he would go around with you in front of me purposely..." his voice trailed off again. "But but ugh. If you really loved me you would have just let me be with who I wanted to be with...even if it meant not being with you..." I start to cry even more. He sits on the grass puts me in his lap and hugs me. "I'm really sorry...Its just idk why I did that. I'm really sorry..."
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I cry on his shoulder and he holds me tight. But then I think: 'Why am I sitting with a murderer?!?! What if he does the same thing to me for not being with him?' I stand up "I gtg" He asks "Is it because you're afraid of me?" "No...no it's not that." I respond as I start to walk away. "Take one more step and I shoot." he says. I stand there frozen in my step. He walks next to me. I stand there hardly breathing trying not to move of fright. "Come with me or else" "Or else what?" I ask. "You really want to know?...or else lover boy dies." He pointed at Dimitri one of my best friends. "Ok I'll go with you just please dun't hurt him!" I cry. Austin laughs an evil laugh "Come now." "Wait what about Dimitri?" I ask. "Oh I forgot about him." He unties Dimitri, and with the rope he ties my hands and feet together so I can't escape. Dimitri looks at me worriedly I look at him and mouth to him to get help he nods and goes running to go find help.
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ill finish it late cuz i have writers block :P
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As Dimitri runs away I just stare...He is not in sight anymore but now I wave and think 'I have faith in you'. Austin picks me up roughly. "Ow!" "What is your problem now?" "Dude be more gentle with me I'm not just another guy you can hurt I'm a girl and hurt easily...",I say. "Whatever" he says.
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