Nothing Special
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Thread Topic: Nothing Special
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I'm literally going to write a "fanfiction" of an RP me and Br0wnieBunny are doing.You can hate on it, I'm just looking to boost my writing skills and I'm looking for ways to make this dramatic.
Eren panted loudly, his breaths mixed in with whimpers and curse words. He had woken up from a lovely dream. Nathaniel's screaming could be heard from the room besides his. He had begged to be the one to get a gender change. Now it sounded like he- no, she- regretted thinking that. It was too late now.
He could remember when he had first been told that he was going to be moved from his cozy cage to one that was smaller. Poor Eren had been injected with something, given an apple, and send off on his merry way. He wasn't sure what has surprised him the most: The fact that the scientists wanted him to have kids with a GUY, or the fact that he had to mate with a merman. A fish! He had been so horrified then, and he had checked his wings over several times to make sure they wouldn't disappear or smell bad.
Now, bird boy was worrying about his mate. His beautiful mate had already been stripped of her tail, virginity, and sex. She was probably going to stay a female for the rest of her life, and would probably never see her tail again. She was just a toy in the scientist's eyes, a replacement could be found. A replacement mermaid or merman, a replacement for their experiment.. However, the children about to be born were not replaceable. They were special. They were special property that belonged to the scientists. Not Eren, not Nathaniel, but the scientists.
As Eren started to think scarier thoughts on the matter, a nurse poked her head into the room. "Angel boy, you may come in now. Your rewards are waiting for you." She smiled a fake smile at him, opening the door wide. "We had you wait an extra hour so we could get them ready. He jumped up from the bed, running into the room without a second thought.
In the other room, Nathaniel was asleep on a hospital bed, doctors swarming over her and checking to make sure she was okay. Three doctors were standing away from her, holding bundles. The first doctor had a sad smile. Eren didn't want to see what was wrong- he already knew the poor thing was dead. He went over to the two that had real smiles. In the second doctor's arms, a baby was attempting to squirm out of the towel it was in. Its eyes were wide open and it was making odd cooing noises. Around the baby's neck were an array of dove feathers that formed a little mane. As it struggled harder, the doctor finally helped it get out of the blanket. A bright red tail was flopping up and down, making swishing noises in the air. Eren gasped. The little tail reminded him of Nathaniel's tail. The onlg difference was that instead of scales being on the fins, there were more dove feathers. This was the result of a bird mating with a fish.
He bent down, kissing the baby's forehead. It cooed happily, giggling. "Can you tell if it's a male or female?" He asked the doctor. "Male. Mermen have the darker shades of scales while mermaids have the brighter colors," the doctor responded. "You have a healthy son." Eren smiled, bowing his head. He moved on to the third doctor, peering at the little bundle there.
The baby inside of the blanket was fast asleep, its thumb in its mouth. It had a peaceful look on its face. Eren couldn't see anything out of the ordinary. Sweetly, he asked, "Can you take the blanket off, please?" The doctor did as asked, setting the blanket on his shoulder. The baby was a female, no doubt about it. She had little fins on her ankles and her feet were webbed. The doctor turned her around to show Eren that two itty bitty wings were poking into existance on her back. He smiled in delight, helping the doctor wrap her back up. "She's a healthy little angel," the doctor commented. "When we washed her off, she splashed the water with her feet rather than her hands."
Eren smiled fondly at the little girl. So Nathan's dream had come true- they had one girl and one boy. But what was the first baby? What had become of it? His smile faded as that doctor walked over. "It was a human. Nothing special, Falcon. It couldn't handle our meds. Too much for the little thing. It would have been a girl, though. Would you like to hold her before we bury her?" For a moment, Eren almost shoved the doctor away. He knew that he'd become attacted to it. It was HIS, after all. But he owed the dead baby a cuddle before it was buried. He took the bundle. Without a word, he cuddled the cold body until he was told that it was time to go.
As Eren was lead out of the room with his new son and daughter, he doctor who took the dead baby scowled. "Yuck! He held the dead thing! We shouldn't have let him touch that piece of s---! Our Falcon is too good for this dead thing. Why, I was surprised it cried the loudest." The other doctors nodded in approval. "We don't have time to bury it." "Put it in a jar?" "Eww, gross!" "Dump it down the trash. At least it'll get turned into ashes, right? We'll tell him we buried it for him. All in favor?" When everyone raised their hand, the doctor opened the trash bin.
"You were nothing special, kid, so don't feel bad." -
cries
the dead baby no
WHY -
dark really shouldn't be allowed to write
Eren: they killed her with their big needles ;A; -
f---ing
SCIENTISTS -
Scientists: HUMANS SUCK
Eren: *cries* -
HUMANS DO NOT SUCK
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