My Beautiful Past...NOT
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Thread Topic: My Beautiful Past...NOT
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Hi my name is Jay Walker you might think of me as your average girl who has a iPhone and lots of dresses. You are wrong if you think that. I am a abused adopted child my real mother and father died when I was 12 years old in a accident when the accitdent happed I was at my friends house because I have no other family members. Anyways I was adopted to the Harrisons they seemed like a good family but they arent. When they adoted me they took me to their house which is about 2 hours away from the orpahage whn we got to that house my "Father" started to hit me while my "Mother" just sat their drinking and somking the last thing I heard was "You little b!tch I'm going to make your life living hell" and then I blacked out.
So what do y'all think?
Should I continue?
Here are the charateristics of Jay
Hair:Brown and reaches her back
Eyes:Green
Personality:Quiet,Smart,Shy,Can be rude at times
Age:16
Wears:Jeans,Hoodie,Convers, and beanie -
POOR KID!
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Hmm... Is this a role-play?
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Should I continue?
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@Joker1001: No its not a role-play its just a idea that popped into my head.
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So far, it seems good.
Hey, are you 'Luna Siren'?
Oh, and is this a story in progress that you are writing?
(Oh, and I replied to your... RP idea in The Stage.) -
Thanks
No im not 'Luna Siren'
Yes
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REALLY GOOD STORY!
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@JosiePurple: Thank you. Do you think I should continue?
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I wake up and I see pure blurryness I close my eyes for at least 30 seconds,and I then open them and look at my surrondings and I see my "Mom" and "Dad" passed out on the couch with at least 20 packets of ciggerets empty and about 10 cases of beer empty. I make my way upstairs and go into what I think its my room and I head to the cracked glass and I see my reflection and what I see is not pretty,I see at least 20 cuts on my left arm,I have 3 big bruises on my stomach,A cut on my lips,A bump on my head,and I have a black eye.I then grab my stuff and jump out the window,landing on the grass I try to run to the orpahange but its no use cause I pass out 5 minuets later.All I hear are sirens and a teenage boys voice screaming "Are you ok? Don't worry the ambulance is coming.Stay with me please."
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So what do y'all think?
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It's good! This is dramatic. I like it.
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This is pretty good! And dramatic.Please continue.
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