She can see you.

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Thread Topic: She can see you.

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  LetsBeFriends Junior

  11 years ago
  
  
  Shush.
  Don't move.
  Don't open your eyes.
  Don't even breathe.
  
  Every movement you make, no matter how small or big, she can see it. Your arm, twitching. And your eyelashes, quivering from your strenuous attempt to stay still. She's like Satan, watching from hell. She sits on her throne of flames, watching. Watching, and waiting for you to make that one little movement. Her multicolored eyes of light lilac, grey, and green are locked onto you. Don't move. Don't you dare. Do you want to die? I think not.
  
  But wait, you something ignite. Then you smell the strong smell of smoke, forcing its way up your nose. The next thing you know, the room is engulfed in light lilac, grey, and green flames. You fight back the urge to move. You CAN'T move. You can't even make a sound, or scream for help.
  
  She's clever, huh? This is what she wants. She wants to know if you can pass the test. But what's the point? You'll die either way.
  
  Shush.
  Don't move.
  Don't open your eyes.
  Don't even breathe.
  
  You have 2 choices. Die in the flames, or.....what would happen if you opened your eyes? Would she take your soul? Would she kill you herself? Would she....torture you until you beg for mercy? Wrong, wrong, and wrong.
  
  You scream.
  You move.
  You open your eyes.
  You breathe heavily.
  
  Oh god, what have you done? It's too late now. The flames stop. She's released from the throne of her flames, the same color as her eyes. But...then she is replaced. With you.
  
  You sit in the throne of flames, watching, and waiting....with your light lilac, grey, and green eyes.
  
  
  .................
  
  
  She can see you.
  Shush.
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  LetsBeFriends Junior

  11 years ago
  *you hear something ignite.
  
  I literatlly just wrote this off the top of my head. Just now. Now joke.
• LoSt GiRl Newbie

  11 years ago
  Good story
  
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  LetsBeFriends Junior

  11 years ago
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  wolf_heart Novice

  11 years ago
  Woahwa now I'm freaked out o.o
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  ange Experienced

  11 years ago
  That was a very interesting and engaging piece of writing. I really like it. It's mysterious and strange. You are indeed talented :)
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  LetsBeFriends Junior

  11 years ago
  You should be xP
  
  Thanks :)
  
  Does the picture go with the story?
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  LetsBeFriends Junior

  11 years ago
  DUN DIE D:

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