I have a series called 'Bright Light in the Darkness'

Thread Topic: I have a series called 'Bright Light in the Darkness'

GinnyGirl Experienced

11 years ago

Hi. As the title said, I've got a new series called 'Bright Light in the Darkness'. I would really appreciate it if you read it. Here's a preview:

I was running, running through darkness. I ran along the wet grass, my bare feet sinking in the mud. I had to keep running. I didn't dare look back. If I was caught I would be letting down everyone. My sister, Lisinia, my best friends, Mika and Chitae, my parents and anyone else who had died for me. I ran straight ahead. I saw a great black lake in front of me. I didn't have time to turn. I ran straight into it and swam as quickly as possible to the other side, where I crawled up the bank and kept running.

I could see the village coming back into view ahead of me. I pelted towards it. There were people everywhere, and in the darkness the village looked black. I ran forwards, in amongst the people. I knew I couldn't blend. Everything here is black. The houses are black. The people have black eyes, black hair, black clothes. Here, with my white hair and silver eyes, I stick out like a white splodge in the middle of a black canvas.
ange Junior

11 years ago

It's really good! You're very talented :)
LoneShadowWolf Junior

11 years ago

That's is pretty freaking awesome. More, please.
LoneShadowWolf Junior

11 years ago

*That
GinnyGirl Experienced

11 years ago

Thanks. :)

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