Deception
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Thread Topic: Deception
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I tossed and turned in my sleep, I had this strange feeling, like I was somewhere else, I finally felt like I was waking up. My eyes opened, and I slowly sat up, I wasn't awake, but what I saw was strange. I realized I wasn't home anymore, where was I?! I quickly looked around, I was in an unknown place, everything was strange, there were strange sounds around me and something moving. I thought I heard something and looked up, a large dragon was high in the air, it didn't seem to notice me. It seemed to have two pairs of wings and its wing span was long, its tail end was like a dagger, and slightly curved. Its silver scales looked like they were glowing, the strangest thing was, the dragon's eyes flashed different colors. I suddenly felt fear and looked around for somewhere to hide, then I froze when I heard a chuckle. Something else was here, and it knew I was here, there was nowhere to hide, I badly wished I was able to go back home. I slowly turned to see what was chuckling, a mysterious masked creature stood near me, I knew it was looking at me, once again, it was chuckling, I slowly backed away, something wasn't right about it. "If you are lost, I shall lead you to the dream path". The creature sounded like it was a male, but his voice made me feel more scared, the only thing that kept me from running away was that he seemed to be trying to help me. I wondered why he wore a mask, I noticed a odd marking, wait, no, it wasn't a marking, it was a crack in the area where his head and neck connected, I only saw it for a second or less as he turned to go to whereever we were going. I followed him, by now, the dragon was gone, but around me, there was large oversized bugs that looked like dragonflies, and I sometimes saw something that looked like either a will-o-whisp or something small exploding. He turned his head a little to look at me as we walked, the crack on him cracked a bit more, which made me a bit worried, "I am the creature of trickery, call me Deception". He seemed to be smiling, I noticed that there was a strange white shape/symbol in both of his dark orange eyes, it looked familiar, but he looked back ahead before I could recongnize it. I was still slightly afraid, but kept walking on, Deception had a tail with lemur rings on it, it wasn't short, or long, it has some pointy edges, and on the end, something flickered/glowed a greenish color. I looked a bit closer, there was something on his tail end that was giving off the light, it looked like a small crystal. I was becoming nervous, and I didn't know if I was dreaming or if I wasn't. There was silence between us, I was too nervous to talk, Deception seemed like an odd creature, I didn't how how he would react if I said something, he didn't seem to notice, and kept walking. He had purple scales, but on his legs and down to his paws, it was more lighter/pale, and the rings on his tail were gold/yellow, his body was like a dragon, but he was rather thin and seemed quick, most of his face was covered by his strange mask, which was why I was wondering about him and if he was hiding something. His mask had a swirl/spiral around one of the eye holes, it looked like it was made for his face, because it seemed to fit perfectly, its main color was silver, but the spiral on the left eye hole seemed like it was red, or a color close to red. I stared at Deception as I was walking, his name sounded really strange, but I couldn't think straight, a lot was happening and I didn't know where I was at all, I didn't know where he was leading me, but I was hoping it would somehow take me back to my home...
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Grammar. owo Writing.
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Did I do something wrong?!
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IT'S SO GOOD FDEBGRH *DIES*
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I'm glad you like it :)
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Dear God the grammar. The run-on sentences! IT BURRRRRRRNSSS.
Other than that it was okay. Not bad but not special.
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