Just a little something I wrote..
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Kuro finished her rice and set her chopsticks down. Boy, she felt as if she gained 100 lbs.
"Kuro, slow down." Okaasan ordered.
"No. I'm still hungry." Kuro lied.
Tsuki came running in the room, with Hikage following after her.
"Guess what?" Tsuki grinned.
"What?" Kuro got up.
Tsuki held out her new stuffed animal. "It's a Unicorn! Her name is Molly!"
Hikage chuckled. "I won it at the fair for her."
"That's so nice." Okaasan smiled.
Kuro fell over.
"Kuro?" Hikage raised an eyebrow.
Kuro moaned. "I'm so full.."
Okaasan shook her head. "She's ate 5 bowls of rice."
Hikage's eyes slightly widened and his ears flicked. "Is that so? For a cat that's 13 in human years?"
Tsuki gasped. "I could never eat that much."
Kuro got up again and grinned in triumph. "I did."
(I'll continue tomorrow afternoon.) -
Hikage laughed. "You're so 'you' sometimes, Kuro."
"I'm 'me' all the time." Kuro winked.
Okaasan brought 2 more bowls of rice.
"For me..?" Kuro's voice trailed off.
"No, for your siblings." Okaasan's ears flicked.
Tsuki giggled. "Thank you Okaasan."
"Thanks Okaasan." Hikage slightly smiled.
Okaasan purred. "You're welcome."
"Okaasan, what about me?" Kuro pat her stomach, making it very obvious that she can't eat anymore.
Okaasan shook her head. "You've eaten enough."
Kuro looked down.
Hikage pulled out a long brochure. "Okaasan, can we go to Niagara Falls?" Hikage pointed to the brochure.
Okaasan suddenlt stopped making rice and turned. She took a long glance at the brochure. "I'm not sure."
"C'mon, Okaasan!" Kuro whined.
"It sounds so fun!" Tsuki pouted.
"Please?" Hikage begged.
"Oh, alright.." Okaasan rolled her eyes.
(I never knew I'd be on this morning. I'll continue this afternoon.) -
Not bad. Maybe a bit more description? You're a good writer though
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"Are you serious?" Kuro gasped in surprise.
Hikage and Tsuki jumped up and down, holding hands, both giggling and had huge smiles on their faces.
Okaasan chuckled. "Is there like--a hotel or something we'll be staying at?"
Hikage stopped jumping and got the brochure back out. "Yes." he pointed to the cabin in the foreground of the brochure.
Okaasan nodded.
"So when will we be going?" Tsuki asked with curiosity.
"Tomorrow morning." Okaasan grinned.
Kuro gasped. "Will we have enough time to pack all of your stuff?"
"Just about enough." Hikage narrowed his fingers so his index finger and his thumb were only a few centimeters away from meeting.
Kuro whined. "Will there be cell-service?"
Hikage nodded.
Kuro pouted. "And internet connection?"
Tsuki nodded.
"Then I don't see why we shouldn't go!" Kuro grinned.
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