Be careful ehat you wish for.
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Thread Topic: Be careful ehat you wish for.
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She had no more tears to shed. Her parents's death dawned upon her so often, it was as though it never happened. She lay in her bed as a flood of childhood memories crashed down on her. Her thoughts were interupted by a soft desperate knock on her door. She got up, and stepped out into the cold.
The door creaked open with uncertainty.
"Who is it?" she asked.
No one was there, she could see nothing but the pale moon.
she was about to go inside when she sttod on something.A piece of paper.
"Make A Wish" That was all it said.
"Is this a joke? It's Not a very funny one!" she yelled. But still, she was desperate. she closed her eyes and wished scilently.
"I wish...My family, I want them back."
When Evangeline turned to go inside, she came face to face with a woman. A witch.
"So then love, you wish for your family back huh? You do of coursly realise the afterlife changes people? Your parents are, and never will be the same again." The hag said carelessly.
"Oh come now. You and I both know you don't give a flying pigs ass about what happens to me." Evangeline replied.
"Well, it's done. they are back. And yes, they remember everything. you, the accident, good luck dear..." she started making her way to the door, and just when she was about to leave, she turned and whispered, "You'll need it."
She swore she could see hell through that womans eyes.
The door swung open. Cold rushed into the home, and in walked her parents,
10 years later.
Evangeline was now 18. After regretting her wish, and suffering 10 years of abuse, she ran away.
After her mother left, her father went mad. and was furious that she left, he spread a rumor, a lie, around the whole land that Evangeline had tried to seduce and hurt him. When this reached the KIng, the were soldiers at every corner of the kingdom.
Her feet were cold and raw. She had been running for hours since they had found her. Until...a dead end...nowhere to turn, run or hide. The slow trots of horses gradually came to a stop, and Evangeline, was surrounded.
A man slowly climbed off his black stallion with its blood shot eyes, in his hand, a rope, a rope with a hangers not.
In front of him, the witch.
"you! You led them here!" Evangeline yelled.
"I told you not to make that wish. You cheated death, now it has come for you."
Evangeline looked up and her dead body swaying in the wind. her nacklace of rope looked so tight, and her long black her wet, and stuck to her face.
Now she wonders in the black abyss of the forest, never able to leave.
Be careful what you wish for.. -
i know there is a typo in the title, sorry about that.
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This is a really good piece of writing :) You're great!
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AWW, Thanks. :)
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Good plot and characters, not so good spelling and grammar.
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Well I don't mind all that much about the grammer. I thought I did pretty well, got a good grade for it, as for the spelling, they are just some typos that occured since it was the middle of the night and we had no electricity...
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