New OC- Needs critique and name assistance!
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Thread Topic: New OC- Needs critique and name assistance!
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So I adopted this cutie here:
(He says hi!) from a DA user named LlamaRingLeader. His design is now mine, so yaaaay me!
Anyway, I sketched him out. Here's the unedited, unlined, and uncolored version of my sketch here:
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I'd like some critique before I finish lining and coloring him. I'm only lining + coloring the two big hands behind him for now, but I need opinions on the rest of the sketch. Additionally, I need help picking a name. All help is welcome and I thank you so much for your time!
Notes:
-If you need anything like his personality to help make up a name, let me know.
-You can scale it from one to ten if you'd like.
-Pointing out the nice things and bad things would be considered critique for me.
-Red lines are always nice if you want to take the time! -
He's f---ing adorable but I'm horrible at names but s--- he's cute.
i mean ig the proportions of the torso don't match the bottom but meh -
I know right? ;w; I want to squish his face.
I can fix that. Is there anything else that's not correct? -
I'll have to think about names. I've been using a lot of Chinese names lately so dont be surprised if my suggestion is odd.xP
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I don't mind. x3 I'm pretty sure an odd name would fit him to begin with. Thanks~
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I tried fixing those legs up as much as possible, though I can attempt to make them longer if needed. Does this look better?
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The reason why his legs look shorter and off is because of the line that parts down the legs is suppose to be touching the edge of the jacket.
This line
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Either that, or you're going to have to make the legs longer.
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Ooooh. I get it. I'll fix that when I get home. Thank you!
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Check your Kik pls
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Named the bae and finished the drawing :'D
Thanks for all of the help, everyone!
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HE IS SO CUTE
I JUST WANT TO SMASH HIM /shot
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