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Alright, I'm gonna try to give you a meaningful critique instead of poking at it like I usually do.
Firstly, I'd like to suggest you to try different things. This is really helpful in improving your art and will make you more experienced in different poses and such. I see a couple things I've always seen in your drawings, or at least most of them: The attempt at hiding your hands, the usual curl you put into the hair, the large chest. Perhaps rid the curl, try a smaller chest and every once in a while expose the hands? You'll never be good at something unless you occasionally try escaping your comfort zone. Trust me, it helps.
As for the drawing, the first thing I noticed was the set of legs. They look rather... thick. You could say that her legs are supposed to be that thick, but to be honest, they don't look natural. And I've noticed that the lines look slightly swiggly near her right hip (or left hip, if you were talking mirrored vision). And the way that the left hip connects to that left leg looks distorted as well. You just gotta be careful with that, okay?
Secondly, the arms and shoulders. They look lanky. Especially the left one, it just sort of fades out into the hair, and no offense, if you were to pinpoint it, it would look like a... twig? As for the shoulders, the left shoulder looks extremely pointy and really small. And the shoulder on the right looks small as well. So I suggest working on those shoulders too.
Thirdly, the exposure towards the bikini area. There is too much being exposed for their not to actually be showing anything, you know? Unless you're really intending to draw the vagina, cover up the vagina. Alright?
And a couple nitpicks I can't just help but point out. The lines in some areas are way too thick. Breasts can't be that thick, the way the vaginal area connects to the left leg? That line looks too thick. The elbow crease looks too thick. The armpits look way too thick. I understand you're trying to shade, but perhaps try to shade by taking a tone slightly darker than the skin color and using that to shade in? You know, just to make it look more natural.
This may seem mean, but the eyebrows look weird. Did she use eyebrow pencil or are those tattooed on? They shouldn't be so far up the forehead like that. Make them slightly thicker and move them down. That way it'd look a whole lot more natural. Also, I should see some lines of the collarbone. It doesn't have to pop out, but they still have to show.
Some things I like about the drawing is the hair. I like how you made her hair different colors. I also like the patterns on the bikini.
And here is my honest critique. Yup. -
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