So I had this idea
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Thread Topic: So I had this idea
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"Hah, not very likely. Me and...well, I'm not on good terms with a couple people higher up."Nowell stated, the locket around her neck catching the light. A red glow seeped through the side cracks, and the flames engraved in it sparkled.
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"That's a pretty locket." Karla said, smiling. "You had it for a while?"
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Nowell looked at her, raising an eye brow, then nodded "Yes. For as long as I can remember."
She self consiously flipped it over off the fire side, back to the less obvious hawk side. -
Another akward silence. "Right, well I do think I should be going now."
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"Alright."Nowell said, then blinked as she noticed Mae's black curls from some bushes.
"Mae?"She called, and the girl peeked out.
"Mom says thanks, Nowell."Mae said, sneezing. -
"Who's that?" she asked, completly forgetting what she was about to do not a minute before.
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"Oh, my name's Mae Hughes." Mae said, smiling.
"She's...a friend."Nowell said, a bit uncomfortable seeing as she had fled because of that. -
So, in your subtitle, you said you had a plot idea right?
"Hughes......sounds kinda familiar......" she said, digging back into the far reaches of her mind. -
Yeah..3.
"Yeah, my mom's name is Elicia. My dad's in the military, though mommey doesn't have the same last name as him. His name is Rief."Mae jabbered on, like any little girl would.
Nowell looked down, fixing her gray eyes on her feets. -
Can I hear plot idea? :3
Karla listened, nodding every so often. She just loved kids, probably mostly because they were such good readers. -
Well, I didn't have the whole thing really, just something involving new humonculi. I didn't have much..
"I had a grandpa..but I never got to meet him. Supposedly he was a brave soldier."She said, blinking "But mommy won't say anything else about him." -
Oh, okie.
Suddenly, as if struck by lightning, she remembered why the little girl's name sounded so familiar. "Oh now I remember! Your grandfather's name was Maes, yes?" -
I'd like help with that.>.< If you would..
"Yep. I was named after him."Mae said, smiling. She then turned to Nowell "Nowell, mom asked if you got burned when you went to save her."
Nowell shook her head. "I'm perfectly fine.." -
I'd love to help! :D
"You saved her...?" Well, makes more sense then trying to eat a person. Stupid, Karla! -
Yay!:D
"Yeah..."Nowell started, then Mae butted in "Yeah! She ran right into the fire like it was no big deal, and managed to know just the right second before the fire would fall and when she could leap through. She's awesome."
"Not awesome...just observent.."Nowell stated, slightly embarressed by the praise.
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