Here you go dragon
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Thread Topic: Here you go dragon
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I chuckled, "I'm ok" I said, I was a bit nervous, I wanted to tell her my secret, I loved her, but, I didn't know what she would say ( gtg, continuing tomorrow )
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"Alright, whatever you say." She laughed.
kay. -
( wanna continue?! :) )
I sat down on a rather large rock and was thinking to myself, and was smiling, I was staring at naki, I was too afraid to tell her that I loved her, but I really wanted to -
eh why not.
Naki shrugged, Wolf was staring at her, which wasn't new but it made her wonder why. Was her hair sticking out? Eh, she didn't care anyways. She turned around started off again. "Welp, I'll be off, later." -
I was a bit sad, I lost my chance once again, I just sat there watching her leave
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Naki finally made it to the boundaries of the forest, she went further in and sat on a tree branch for a nice nap.
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I hoped that naki loved me back, but she didn't seem that interested in me, I wondered where she was
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Naki couldn't fall asleep, she was annoyed at a rampant feeling. She decided to ignore it and went deeper into the forest.
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I sighed and slowly got up, I stretched out my large wings, it was torn up a little from fights in the past, but it didn't hurt, I jumped in the air and flew extremely high above the clouds, my eyes went wide when I saw a shooting star, a rather close one ( XD wolf is almost in space! )
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Stop right there.
You want to make a manga, you also need some specks of realism in there. If Wolf breathes human air at that point he should be suffocating. The atmosphere is too thin up there. Unless you have some explanation to why he can be up there, you might want to changethat. -
( O. o I'm sorry )
I went a bit too high, I could barely breath, I went a bit lower, I liked flying around -
I can fix small problems like that, but aside from that I can't help you
I can be your proof reader of ideas? xD
Naki at that point got bored and went home. -
( XD ok )
I slowly flew down, when I landed, I slowly spread them out, they were hurting a little bit, I flew up really high, but it was a long way, kind of, except I flew rather quickly, ( is it ok if wolf landed in the same spot as he was before, like near the big rock he sat on while he was staring at naki? ) -
( hello??? )
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sure
sorry, didn't see you post xD was in stupid fight
Naki...was home sleeping.
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