Coercion Part 4 | Comments

Levi tho...I'm in love. I swear Dannica, u will b the death of me bcuz of all that cuteness on that chapter. Brother Jerimiah questioning me? I wonder on what circumstances. Well thank you Dannica!:) Is it weird that I check wattpad and Gotoquiz everyday to see if u updated? Yeah...idk y i mentioned that, oops.

oh my gosh wow levi is the cutest!! I got so mad about his parents you don't understand, I absolutely HATE child abuse! It's just like with Alex and Robert in the beautiful series ugh but I'm glad i was able to get him out of there...even if it was with eliza...

Rave is so protective and it's the cutest thing ever! When he came and held levi and everything in the hospital room i WAS DYING DANNICA YOU WERE KILLING ME AND I KNOW YOU DO THIS ON PURPOSE!

Ugh, what have I done that brother jerimiah wants to question me really -___-

OH AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN I HAVE NO POWERS??

awww levi...

WAIT HOLD UP! WHY DON'T I HAVE POWERS?!?!? EXPLAIN! I WANTED TO, um, KICK SOME STUFF! like take that! and that! WHY DON'T I HAVE POWERS, WHY?!?!?!

my feelings/thoughts right now: rave - i love him so much, and his dimples! but you better make a move or else i'll start liking someone else; flame - if you don't want to lose my heart, DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT!; web - (facepalm) are you really trying to hook up with eliza now? sigh...; eliza - ok, you're alright, but don't you dare make a move on my flame and rave...; brother jerimiah - why are you so scary?!?! and why you touching my shoulder?!?! >:( i don't like you!

The part with Levi and Rave was the cutest!!!! Oh my god and why does brother Jerimiah want to question me???? This part was great as always dannica, and I LOVE your story Crevice!!! But I still don't know if I like Eliza or not

MOREEE

Okay, that was a great part! Gosh, it's taken me so long to get back into these. I've been so busy lately! Anyway, great part! I must read the others! :P

Is part 5 coming soon? Iove these!