Coercion Part 1 | Comments

Yay it's here!!! Thank you for bringing this out so fast!!!! Omg web is so cute haha aND FLAME YAY LITTLE MOMENT WITH HIM you know he hasn't been arrogant lately, and I think that shows the difference between web and him

Flame can be all serious and compassionate about certain things while web just kind of rolls with it although I am suspicious about why they ARE acting so good with it..even after that scene in the aisle

AND RAVE OH MY GODASHKA "You're more than a responsibility to me. I hope you know that."

WHAT IS THAT SUPPOSED TO MEAN?!?! IM TIRED OF JUST GETTING HINTS WITH HIS FEELINGS I DEMAND A KISS DANNICA RIGHT NOW

RIGHT
NOW

Dannica, your writing will be the death of me I swear.

LAWWWD HAVE MERCY!

That was amazing, ugh, when you write you take me to some place where the real world and the world in the story are the same and when I finish I just think "Well shiznets Dannica you did it again."

Seriously my body can't handle this.
MY BODY CAN NOT HANDLE THIS.

(You make my life better ily if I ever saw you somewhere I'd be like "DANNICAAAA" and you'd be like "oh lord Jesus, it's a ratchet" And we'd get all ghetto and then realize we're fancy as have tea with the queen.)

I'm sorry I'm just over tired.

What a great start! Ugh, I could just FEEL the emotional tension with Rave!! And Flame is so precious he is such a keeper, I can't wait until he gets back to his regular self, whoever, because as of right now I know he is still trying to recover from all of this. I'm leaning more towards the Rave Crave!! I MEAN THOSE NOTES THAT RAVE MADE AND WROTE LIKE UGHH HFIHSDFI WHY WHY WHY DANNICA WHY

UGBH AGH! RAVE, MY HEART SSHDSKFAKH!!! JUST KISS ME PLZ!!!!! STOP HOLDING BACK FOR ONCE IN YOUR LIFE!!!! >:( he better kiss me soon, or else i won't hold back from hitting my computer... but i can't stop thinking about, "P.S. You're more than a responsibility to me. I hope you know that." STOP IT WITH THE HINTS RAVE!!! I'M GOING TO STOP BREATHING UNLESS YOU DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT!

web and flame are sooooo funny, and they made me laugh so hard... hmm, i wonder why they're taking this so well... suspicious...

I'm so glad that you make a sequal to Confinement! Also, I thought it was so sweet how Rave left a note! I love Rave! Oh, how I wish he was real! :) A big part of me hopes that the James Dawn people don't catch up with them... Also, I hope that Naomi and Lauren are okay...

Guurl, ain't nobody got time fo sleep.
Haha, We can both be ratchets.

(Dear god, 'ratchet' itself sounds ratchet after saying 'ratchet' so many times WHAT IS HAPPENING)

Again another genius chapter by the one and only, Dannica. Aka ONE OF THE BEST FLIPPIN WRITERS IK! Loved the paintball story

Oh M GOD! Dannica you melt me. This is beautiful youre a angel aent from heaven - god's gift! Next part!!!