An Immortal Heart Part 1 | Comments

Ohmysweetgoodnes. *looks around wide eyed* okay that was a bloody/terrifying cliffhanger. Now, for part 2 to find out if the main character really went splat like a bug or jumped up supernaturally or one of the boys saved her in super speed or she finds out she is immortal or.... no i will not start blabbing my mouth again. Okay, so now that i am sucked into once another wonderful quiz series, i must read on till the very end, so i will patiently sit here for the next one.

Ohhhh my GOD that was awesome!!!! You sound like you've been writing for a long time! Seriously! :) I totally agree with PuffBall in every way... ^.^ If you'd like some inspiration, check out xxblutixx's Don't Leave Me Hanging series; they're really good! Well, can't wait for part 2! *drags in chair and mini-fridge to stake out New Quizzes list with xxblutixx* :p

All right, let me guess......the main character gets hit by the car but she lives because she's immortal? On the other hand, ICE CREAM!!!! I liked this, please make part 2 soon!

This was really good! But I absolutly hate that cliffhanger! I can't wait for the next one.

IKR MAH ICE CREAM!!!!! hehe. Now i just have to wait for my other friends quiz series, well their third quiz series to come out. gosh, it really has been years. .-. time has fast forward.