An ending at Hogwarts | Comments

Wow, nice start! The Hunger Games-like writing (present tense) was a nice choice for your writing style, and I really appreciated the proper grammar and spelling. I also like how you included Seamus in there as well. He isn't included in many series, so it's fun to see a different option or two once in awhile. Since you're starting in sixth year, it'll definitely be interesting to see how you play this out. I'm off to read part 2!