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  • I feel so bad for not saying anything for so long... >.< so I'm going to give you a little sbeak peek at the next part. :)

    Zuko thrusts low, then feints at your right side. You are still a bit unbalanced from the previous blow, and clumsily try to block his blade, which has already flashed over to your left side, almost cutting that arm, too, had you not jumped back in time. More awake now, you glare at Zuko. He glares back, almost playfully, like he's taunting you, and for a moment, everything is still. Then, he lashes out again, his sword almost cuttinging your right leg before you bring your own blade down and parry it. But your blade hits empty air: Zuko has already disengaged and is aiming for your left side, just like last time. But now you know what he'll be doing, so you quickly bring your blade over to block his stab. Somehow your upper blade ends up near his pommel, and you instinctively flick your wrist sharply, his blade goes flying, and before he can recover it, you have your sword tip resting just under his chin.

    Like it? :)

    Flight
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  • @Flight Okay then! Here it is:
    Name: Anastasia(Nickname: Taz)
    Age: The same as _______, I guess
    Power and Element: Pyros - Mind controlling

    Appe arence: Anastasia has long, copper-ish hair that goes down to the middle of her back, which she never sets up on a pony tail or something similar. It's always down. Also, she has dark, emotionless brown eyes. She is quite beautiful, but it's not the first thing you notice about her.

    Personality : She's the calm, laid-back type of person. It's very rare for her to lose her temper, although it can happen. She's easily annoyed, but it's not a very dangerous thing to annoy her. She smiles a lot, and loves just to be hanging out and joking around with people. Her mood is always changing. Just as her element, fire, she is quite unpredictable. But it's mostly the calm and laid-back side of her that shows.

    What do you think? If I wasn't clear with something you'd like to know, tell me :)

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • @Flight Dragons *.* That's an awesome idea :D And about the scout-thingy, it'd be really cool too!

    If you allow me to, I'll happily come up with a dragon :3 Hm, lemme see...

    Does the dragon really have to have a name? If it has to, let's just call him Light. You know, since dragons are known for breathing fire and all... Hm, I was thinking of Light having, like, black scales(A bit irony doesn't hurt, right?), and red eyes.

    I'm sorry it's so simple, but my imagination is completely gone right now. My mind is on a OC I'm having a hard time creating for when I write a certain FanFiction...

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • Oh my gosh, the sneak peek only makes me more excited ^-^ When is the next part coming out? I can't wait *-*

    And Zuko is already my favourite. He's the one you called Blaise earlied in the quiz, isn't it? Because if he is, he looks exactly like me O.o Golden brown hair and amber eyes (My brown eyes turn amber when the sun hits the right angle)... Wow, that's almost creepy :D But I like how I look, so obviously I like his looks too ;)

    Holy cow, I had almost forgotten about these series again... You know what that means? It means I've been too long without Zuko, Eric, Aaron, Sky and the others ._. BUT, because I know exactly how hard it can be to write stuff with deadlines (Sort of), I forgive you :P

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • That's great, thanks! Would you mind if I made Anastasia a scout or something? Not really a spy who goes inside undercover all the time or anything, but just someone who goes to the enemy base and checks things out. Maybe a bit like Emilia from xxblutixx's Don't Leave Me Hanging series (NOT copying or anything! :p). Tell me what you think! If you don't like this idea, just let me know and I'd be happy to change things up. And just saying, her animal bond (each element has one) is a dragon, if that's alright with you. You can create the dragon for Anastasia if you want. If not, I'll just come up with something on my own. :)

    Flight
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  • Haha, it's ok, AiFiah (i hope you don't mind me calling you that)! I'm starting to think that I put in too many guys... lll-_- Zuko will probably take a much bigger role than his twin, so that should help. *light-bulb flicks on* I just got an idea on how to solve the too-many-guys problem... >:) The main guys will most likely be Aaron, Eric, Andrew, Will, and Zuko. I'm debating between possibly dropping Aaron because more people seem to like Will. I have most of part 3 planned out, I just can't spare the time to work on it. I have lots of piano events right now, uck. But in April, I should have a little more time. :)

    Flight
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  • Oh my gosh, I'm sorry I didn't see this comment earlier! You probably think I've forgotten about this series, and I'm ashamed to say that you're right. I didn't mean to, but I read so many series at the same time, it's difficult remembering all of them >.> I used to have a list on all the series I read, but the list's on my other computer, which I haven't used in like, FOREVER. I'm really sorry, I feel really bad for not commenting to you... I've just seen that comment you made on @xxblutixx's quiz, and I'm REALLY sorry that I didn't see it earlier :( Again, I'm SORRY DX

    Your series completely ROCK! I don't know how I could forget about them, but, to prove that I really like it, IF you continue with them, I'll try to comment on every part you release, giving you feedback and "entertaining" you with my "hilarious-ness"(Wh ich I didn't know I had >.>)

    Okay, that up there just sounded weird, but I swear I still love this series :/

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • Thanx everyone! I've been kinda busy recently but I'm starting part 3, which will be a bit shorter than usual because I want to give you guys something to take; I feel kinda bad cuz it took so long to get this part out. :$ @Alexandra: no, the guy on the throne is not Voldemort, but he can be if you want him to (remember when I said "use your own imagination here" in the quiz?)! The idea about a new guy from the Aglaeca is great, I'll think about that one, thanx! :)

    Flight
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  • Awww, thanx, you guys! :3 I'm glad you like it so far. if you'd like, you can tell others about my series because part two didn't show up on the New Quizzes list, do not a lot of people have taken this. @ skysky097: haha, that is kinda ironic! Skyler is a very pretty name! @ gibby: thanx for your enthusiasm! :D @ everyone: I will be working on a few other quizzes, but I plan on getting part 3 started really soon! It's probably going to be one of the shorter ones in this series, but that means I'll be able to get it out sooner. Thanx again to all of you!!!! :)@

    Flight
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  • Yes, tell me all those things about her, please. You could also tell me what special ability she has, depending on her element: Tauros (earth) is teleportation, Aristos (air) is invisibility, Aquos (water) is telekinesis, and Fyros (fire) is mind control/reading. Thanks! :)

    Flight
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  • I commented that down there before I actually read the quiz, because... Well, I wanted to say that I was sorry and all as soon as possible :/ Now, my thoughts on the quiz:

    ERIC!!!! NO! I will save you T.T I swear I will T.T

    Hm. Now that you've added him, I'm starting to like Zuko too... He just seems so... Hot(Not meant to be a joke, even though his element IS actually fire). And I just love fire >.> ARGH, which one do I like the best?! Eric or Zuko?! Ugh, quiz-authors always seem to enjoy making the choice hard to the readers... >:P

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • @Flight I don't mind you calling me that :) There are a lot of people who do, I'm already used to it ^-^

    I think I'm starting to prefer Zuko instead of Eric, and that's JUST BECAUSE OF THE NAME >.>

    I'd like to create a girl character. That'd maybe tone down my feelings of guilt :/

    What am I supposed to tell you about her? Name, age(?), power, appearence, personality... Something else?

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • oh my god i absolutely love your quizzes so far. My favorite is Sky!!! It's ironic too because My name is Skyler so it's perfect! But anyways, I really really really really want you to write part 3 really really really soon. I can't wait and I'm so excited.

    skysky097
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  • Thanks so much! Hehe, you're welcome; how could i NOT mention you? :p I have another story quiz going, so I will probably be working on that for a while, but I'll still try to work on part 3! I only get 15 minutes of computer time each day... :(

    Flight
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  • I'm really sorry I've been gone so long, Aifiah, but I posted my whole explanation on part 36 of xxblutixx's Don't Leave Me Hanging. Long story short, I'm on vacation and I have no Internet where I'm staying. XD

    Flight
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  • Congrats on being a junior, Flight ^^ I just decided to stop by and see how you're faring for part 3. May or early June? so far D: *pulls in a couch and mini-fridge to stake out the new quizzes list*

    xxblutixx
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  • And also, if anyone is interested in creating characters for me, that would be nice. :) I need another girl or two for the time being, but I have enough guys. Thanks!

    Flight
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  • IS THE GUY ON THE THRONE VOLDEMORT? O_o
    I KNEW IT WAS ERIC BUT I LOVE HIM WAHH!!!
    This was GREAT!!! Awesome!

    How about theres a traitor? Or thats sad but wat about a new guy from the Aglaeca pretending to need help but you dont know and then Eric doesnt trust him because hes actually the guy who hurt Eric but no one knows. Anyway whatever you put is gonna be AWESOME!!

    PART 3!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D

    Alexandra_18o
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  • Just added a few more questions to part 3!!!! ^.^ it is still a work in progress, however, but I'm guessing it's releasing date will be somewhere from may-early june.

    Flight
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  • And also, to clear things up, Zuko has amber eyes and Kenneth has green eyes. I know things were a bit unclear with all the new people, so bear with me! :)

    Flight
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  • Yeah, I saw it... But I forgot it again while I was writing the comment... I honestly have no idea of how I manage things like that O.o

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • Ok, I just took this part to see if I messed up on anything, and I did. :p there is no guy named Blaise; I forgot to correct that, sorry. he's supposed to be Zuko.

    Flight
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  • Sounds great! I'll try to fit them in when I can. :) And my status is now Junior!! I'm so happy. Just thought I'd say that here. :p

    Flight
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  • Awww you mentioned me, thanks :3 The ending was so dramatic o.o can't wait 'til part 3 comes out :D

    P.S. I love the name Zuko ;)

    xxblutixx
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  • I'M SO SORRY THIS PART TOOK SO LONG TO COME OUT!!!! But here it is, finally!!!! :D Hope you liked it!!!! Please tell me what you thought and any ideas are ALWAYS welcome! Thanx!

    Flight
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