(Intro to story. Hope y'all like it~!) | Comments
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I really really liked it, and I'll definately be looking for a second part! Just a couple things though: be careful with "your" and "you're". I only saw it once, so I don't know if it was just a mistake (I've done it before), but just in case, if you can say "you are" with it sounding right, then use "you're". Like for example: "you are there" sounds right while "you are things" does not. And the other this is that it's not possible for siblings to be four months apart, unless if they are step or half-siblings. But all-in-all, I really enjoyed it.
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^w^ Thank you so much~! I will take your feedback and make it even better! I'll make sure for part two to be out and set soon!
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Omg i loved it please make a 2nd one!!!
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Hai Silver~! ^w^
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lol Hai Mega!! X3
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