Torn part 1

this is tthe first part of torn i worked hard to make it and hopefully you will want to see what happens next because the last part is intristing !!!!

do you like Story quizzez???well this is my first one

Created by: MindDevil
  1. You leaned on the sofa Today was summery and Mikala your friend was coming over to your house to work on the ''VAMPIRE MOBILE'' you to had a sleep over last night and you wont belive it you saw a actul live vampire---with fangs!
  2. When she came she said her dad had finished the mobile.You sighed in relif .Apperantly you did not want to make it.You and Mikala stayed in your dads garage until night time....
  3. When you got the blankets to lay down you both heard a noise down the alley .''should we go check it out?''you asked .Mikala sighed and zipped up her leather coat''yes''
  4. You quickly put on your sneakers and zipped up your jean sweater.''come on'' you whispered.Mikala said ''its coming from the end of the street''
  5. The leaves crunched as You and Mikala tore up to the end of the alley
  6. there was a thick bush the noise seemed to become from behind
  7. ''should we go see?'' Mikala asked .You shook''i dont know
  8. Mikala leaned over and put her hand in the bush.Then taking hold of her right arm a shadowy figure grabbed her....
  9. Comment please
  10. bye,

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