Blossomflower's Shine

This is one of my OC's stories. It's a lot like Crookedstar's past, but has quite a lot differences. I hope you enjoy! I put a LOT of effort into this, also adding stuff.

If this has your OC's in this and this is not their story, I am so very sorry. But maybe on the RP we can pretend like this happened? Or you should make your own stories!

Created by: Berryheart

Are you ready for...
Our "When Will I Die" Quiz?

  1. What is your age?
  2. What is your gender?
  1. Blossomkit blinked at her brother with big green eyes. Ashshade was licking him with feirce grooms. Blossomkit blinked agian. "Leafheart, is she going to get better soon?" Ashshade asked. Leafheart shrugged. "It matters if I can take her to the medicine den," the light brown she-cat meowed.
  2. Blossomkit flattened her ears. Her left green eye had turned real overnight, because of this new sickness. Ashshade pushed Eaglekit towards her. "Are you SURE it's not contagious?" She asked. Leafheart snorted. "No," she growled. Ashshade turned her head. "Well, take her to your den. She doesn't need to be here." Leafheart growled at the selfish queen and picked Blossomkit up. She quickly raced to her den and sat the small gray kit down on a comfey nest.
  3. Blossomkit sighed as her father, Breezetail, passed into the medicine den. Moonkit followed him closely, smiling happily. "They are six moons now," he purred. "And she wants to be a medicine cat." Blossomkit flattened her ears once more, and laid down and covered her face with her tail and paws. Firekit came in and sat beside her, as well as Moonkit and Shadiekit.
  4. Shadiekit licked the poor she-cat's ears.
  5. (Le time skip...Blossomkit becomes Blossompaw, having a tom named Whiskerflare as a mentor. Her father and brother go on a mission to find a warrior named Fawnpelt...and Moonpaw is the new med. cat apprentice)
  6. Blossompaw closed her blue eye and her green eye. The sickness had gone, so had the blindness. But her mother had gone, and now no cat liked her. Her mentor had complained to Snakestar, and Shadiepaw had left her alone. She had two friends, Moonpaw and Firepaw. But they were always busy. Blossompaw was alone for more then her whole apprenticeship.
  7. Blossompaw munched on a vole. A bully apprentice, Bigpaw, came up to her and yanked her up by her scruff. "Hey, oddeyes," he growled, smirking.
  8. Blossompaw frowned, knowing she could do nothing. "Hey! Bigpaw! Put her down this instant!" Snakestar raced over and clawed the huge apprentice's cheek. Bigpaw then leaped back, and Snakestar gave him the worst possible punishment. Exile.
  9. Moonpaw rushed over to Blossompaw, looking over her neck wounds. "Stupid Bigpaw," Moonpaw muttered.
  10. Okay. End of part 1.

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