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(Cover image is latest OC) Hello! Here you can see other people’s OCs rated, and you can even enter you own OC. Just use the form below and comment your answers. The form is also in the afternote. I can do any fandoms, but I may not know it. Part 2: (OC ratings and feedback part 2). Thanks!

Form (don’t make this super long): Grading Sytsem (numbers or percents. The percents more detailed and recommended), Fandom, Name, name meaning, nicknames, age, gender, species, appearance, personality, disorders, likes, dislikes, powers, backstory, family, friends, significant other, enemies, other. I will accept Joke Sues. My comments are in parentheses. Based on appearance I create the character in picrew for cover image.

Created by: Julia
  1. OC #2: (example) Estella Soraya by Julia (grading system: numbers)
  2. Fandom: hunger games (👌)
  3. Name: Estella “Esty” Laila Soraya (nice name! Fits in perfectly with the weird names in the books)
  4. Name meaning: Estella - star, Laila - night, Soraya - Princess, Pleiades constellation (really going with the night/star theme, huh? I like it, but it really depends on the district.
  5. Nicknames: Esty for everyone. She is fine with people calling her Estella, but really prefers Esty. (I like the nickname! Very unique.)
  6. Age: barely 12 (Good age! A bit overused, but all the ages that a eligible for the hunger games are overused, so I’ll let it slide)
  7. Gender: female (ok)
  8. Species: human (ok. I was hoping she wasn’t a dragon-mermaid hybrid or something)
  9. Appearance: Brown hair that goes to her waist that is usually in a French braid, chocolate brown eyes, Mexican skin complex, short for her age (nice appearance! She sounds cute and pretty, but not too much to make it look unrealistic, especially for her age)
  10. Personality: Kind, awkward, nervous, clumsy, cute, innocent, naive, adventurous, fair, extremely loyal (nice personality! She sounds very cute, she must act a bit young for her age though. Other than that, great!)
  11. Disorders: none (ok)
  12. Likes: hanging out with her best friend, reading, exploring the district (ok, good. Works with her personality.) dislikes: training in her district, being in the spotlight (makes sense. So she is a career.)
  13. Powers: none (normal.)
  14. Backstory: district one.. Reaping - Estella was standing in her age group, trembling. This was the first year she would be able to be picked for the Hunger Games. She heard the lady in pink say it was time for the girls’ turn. She squeezed her eyes shut. “Estella Soraya” no. This could not be happening. She walked up, and the rest was a blur.Parade - she bit her lip, looking down at her jewel covered dress. She looked up at her partner. He was seventeen, and looked very smug. He had a very good chance of winning. Her, not so much. The chariot went by and she smiled awkwardly and waved. The crowd cheered. They… liked her. Training scores - after her training test, she was scared. She has just stood there for the ten minutes, too scared to do anything. She gasped at her score. An eight? How?! Interview - they loved her. She acted all innocent. She tugged at the heartstrings. Maybe… just maybe… she could win? Bloodbath - the timer went off and she rushed to the cornucopia. She grabbed a bag. Suddenly her chest hurt. There was an ax. Thrown by her smirking partner who wanted to get we rid of her. The world went black as a cannon boomed. (Wow. -1)
  15. Family: Amehlia Soraya - mother, Lukeo Soraya - father, Lily Soraya - little sister, Glimmer Soraya - older sister (She is the younger sister of Glimmer?! That is actually kinda good…)
  16. Friends: Rose Jewel - Rose is her best friend. They’ve known each other for years. They are each others’ only friend because they do not want to be in the hunger games like the rest of the kids. Rose never got to say goodbye. (Ok. I feel bad for Rose.)
  17. Significant other: none (ok)
  18. Enemies: none (ok)
  19. Other: none (no comment)
  20. -1/30. Wow. A negative! She is definitely NOT a Mary Sue! I am very proud of her as my OC that I made in five minutes. You are welcome to use her for a fanfic idea, just credit me, Julia and put the name of this quiz on the author note.
  21. OC #3: (example) Tanner Clifton by Julia (grading system: numbers)
  22. Fandom: hunger games (I am doing a series of the tributes in the 73rd hunger games - you can write a fanfic using some of my characters)
  23. Name: Tanner Aryan Clifton (ok)
  24. Name meaning: Tanner - leather maker, Aryan - noble and well educated, Clifton - town by the cliff (ok. Aryan is perfect if they are part of the careers)
  25. Nicknames: Cliff for everyone - almost no one knows that his name is Tanner (ok, nice nickname based on last name.)
  26. Age: 17 (ok, right at the edge. Like I said before, all overused ages are hunger games ages, so that’s good.)
  27. Gender: male (ok)
  28. Species: human (👍)
  29. Appearance: messy caramel brown hair and olive green eyes, beige skin, always has a satisfied smirk on his face. (Ok. This is a great appearance. I am guessing he is a career from the smirk.)
  30. Personality: satisfied, arrogant, ungrateful, secretly caring, loyal (I’m glad that there are positive traits, most career OCs are only arrogant. I love the secret personality, I hope he learns to be kind to all.)
  31. Disorders: none (ok)
  32. Likes: training, being better than everybody else, listening to his little sister’s laugh (that is so sweet! I hope this comes out in his personality!) Dislikes: other districts (ok)
  33. Powers: none (good)
  34. Backstory (part one): The reaping - he stood next to his age group, smirking as the reaping was about to start. He was at the limit of being picked, so he needed to be picked. He wanted the glory. As the lady in pink said, “ladies first,” his smile faded. He looked at his little sister Aleah across the area. She looked nervous. It was only here second reaping. She was so small, he was afraid she wouldn’t win if she was put in the arena. He let out a sigh of relief when her name wasn’t called. When his name was called, he walked up to the stage and smirked. But when his eyes met Aleah’s, he frowned. She was scared. For him. (Great so far! Love the twist at the end.)
  35. The parade: he wore a jeweled suit with a cape behind it. He looked down at his partner. She was small, and couldn’t be more than 12 years old. She was going to be an easy target. She smirked again as the chariot went into the crowd as they roared. Training scores: he paced around the room, anxious to know his training scores. As district one flashed onto the screen, he smirked. A nine was perfect. (Ok, so we are now seeing his dark side. Love the switch between character, almost like two personalities taking surfaces at different times.)
  36. Interview: he played it deadly. Confident. Arrogant. He was winning. He knew it. The bloodbath: he looked around before the timer went off. He knew he was going to the cornucopia. He ran into it and grabbed an ax. He swung it at someone, but missed. He then spotted his district partner. There was no way she was joking the careers. He threw the ax, and just as it hit her chest and she crumpled to the ground, she saw her face. Fear. Disbelief. Betrayal. He saw his sister’s face. He looked at his hands. What has he done? (Love this)
  37. Day one: he walked around he cornucopia with the rest of the careers. They decided one would stay back and watch the area while the others hunted for tributes. The district four girl stayed behind. He walked around the woods for a couple hours, when he heard a noise. He looked into a cave nearby, where he saw a tribute passed out from exhaustion. One of the careers killed him quickly. Cliff laughed and kicked dirt on the tribute. They all walked back to the cornucopia. (This personality switch is amazing…)
  38. Day 7: two careers have died so far from a trap and bled out. This time they decided to go deeper into the abandoned city. Then suddenly he heard a strange noise. Small mutts were everywhere! He lunged for shelter, and got some in a small building. He looked back where the district four girl was fighting them off. She was loosing. He had gotten to know her and taken a liking in her lately. He jumped in front of her where a mutt was going to kill her. He fell to the ground as the mutt raised its vale above his heart. His eyes met a camera. “I’m sorry, Aleah. I’m sorry I couldn’t get back to you.” (Wow. That is such a great backstory! -0.5)
  39. Family: Milea Clifton - mother, Jonathan Clifton - father, Aleah Clifton - little sister (ok)
  40. Friends: a lot (a bit more specific please? +1)
  41. Significant other: Lily Waters (crush) (the district 4 girl I am guessing? I’m glad he learned to sacrifice himself.)
  42. .5/30 great score! He is a good character. You can use him for a fanfic idea, but credit me, Julia and put my quiz name in it. Also, if you make that fanfic please put the name of it in the comments so I can read it. I would love to see how you put him in the story!

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