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  • 23% for my BNHA OC, Miwa Shimura.
    SPOILERS AHEAD

    She’s Shigaraki’s older sister by 5 years who was separated from him after THAT DAY. She was at summer camp when his quirk activated, so she survived. The HPSC took her in since she was Nana’s granddaughter, so they figured she’d make a good hero. She met Hawks when he was 7 and she was 10 and they became friends (since they were the only kids).

    Flash forward to when she’s 25, Shigaraki’s running wild and All Might tells her he’s her brother. From then on, she’s convinced she’ll be able to fix him, and he doesn’t even know.

    (She looks a lot like Nana, which makes All Might… bittersweet..?)

    TreeDweller
    1
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  • I got 23%

    I did this for my fan made oc Sinobu which is a MHA oc. His ability is shape shifting. With his shape shifting some limitations are 1)same eye color 2) in all forms except fox if held for to long he can not turn back without the help of a potion.

    He is Aizawas adopted child along with my friends oc. Due to his past he has ptsd (I do try to make the symptoms appear) which hinder him in fighting. Like me he is more interested in herbs than fighting, so he wants to become a side kick that can use its magic to help others (example a foxes tounge is sharp enough to help clean wounds) and also help with rescue missions. Due to his ability to turn into small creatures, going into small places would be easier. Due to his PTSD certain situations can be tramactic that would be fine for others (keep in mind I mainly only role play with this character). Also he tends to lose his human mind even in fox form and end up causing a lot of trouble. He tries to move forward, but sometimes it's hard.

    I'm still working more on him so any suggestions is fine by me

    Ash_Animate
    8
    • What about Kota?

      BobZeBuildah
      2
    • He sounds so awesome compared to the first character I used this quiz for. Her name's Esmee Chan, she has no eyes but still has the same amount of abilities as though she did, she's 18, and she can waterbend. She can also turn regular water into poison/electric water and turn it back to normal without any repercussions. Also she's a half demon, mainly because I wanted her to be Lucifer's daughter (sorry if this offends anyone), and she started out as just an Eddsworld OC, as Tom's sister. But over time, she actually became more or less fleshed out instead of just being a boring persona. And about a year or so ago I had a weird obsession with Mineta and shipped her with him all the time, but now I just have them as a sorta-couple, with Bakugo as Esmee Chan's ex. (In my AU, Mineta is less of a perv, but is also I little desperate still. Also he's somewhat chivalrous too lol-)

      MochiTraceiChan
      3
    • A*

      MochiTraceiChan
      2
    • nice oc.

      otatop
      3
    • Thanks!

      MochiTraceiChan
      1
  • The OC I used for this quiz is Shiro Akawaito. He is a human with natural white hair and red eyes (In his world weird colored hair and eyes are normal.) He is 14. His nationality is Japanese (kinda did that because I wish I was Japanese ;-;) He is not a fan character. I don't have much for his backstory, but I do have a start. By the way, his backstory was based on the urban legend "coin locker baby" and the song by Maretu of the same title.

    Shiro was the result of an accidental pregnancy. His mother was not ready to take care of a child yet, she wasn't prepared. She couldn't get an abortion because he was too old, so she just let him be born. She couldn't put him up for adoption either because the local adoption center only accepts children 3 months and up, and she wanted him gone immediately, so she quickly devised a plan. His mom took the train back from the hospital. When she arrived at the train station, she stuffed him in a coin operated locker, hoping someone would find him and take care of him. Now it'd be a boring story if that was where it ended, wouldn't it? So.. he survived!! Yay!

    He had utilized a power that he'd never known he had until then. This power allows him to hibernate, shutting off his needs and preserving his body until he decides to wake up. He automatically went into hibernation mode when he was put into the locker. He escaped by waking up and lockpicking, which happened when he was 5. Realistically, someone would've found him earlier, but the locker was jammed shut from the outside and no one bothered to repair it because plot convenience. Idk the rest yet.

    I got 21%, but I would've gotten higher if I would've been able to go into detail. Oh well.

    moefoxes
    6
    • I think it should be lower depending on how far his abilities can go. I think he's really cool! He is in no way a Gary Sue, his ability has it's limits and I respect that. His backstory isn't "oh yeah his mom abused him in every way possible but he turned out to be immortal and killed her!!!!!!!!!", no, it's very balanced. I feel like it wouldn't be higher. Very nice oc!

      eliotyohei
      3
    • why do you wish that you were japanese lmao

      kukosspouse
      3
  • 33% Mary Sue, I expected my character would be average to little be mary sue lol.

    My OCs name is Willow, shes 20 and twice my age Oof- But shes my height, 53. With purple eyes and grey-purple hair, one of her eyes covered by a bandage. She looks pretty androgynous now that I gave her a more original appearance.

    I started her off by using someone elses character design. I know, I copy :( but I did give credit of course, then as time went on I gave her more original decor on her outfit, etc. It started off with a witchy small young adult to a dapper looking fine young lady. I kept the witch hat cause I liked it.

    She has quite the name for herself, practically despised by her fellow hometown, etc. Willow mostly isolating herself in the dark, her powers are out of her control. Using Deltarune/Undertale references for her, its HATE. ;)

    Shes decently attractive, thats all I can say.

    Yeah this is my OC who I made since November 2018. Hope you like this soul reaper smol girl.

    anxiellwillows
    4
    • If I understand correctly that you are 10 years old, that's not bad at all. If you were any older than 13 I'd probably be bashing you, but you'll get there yourself just fine I think. Do understand that your character actually does sound like a bit of a mary sue lol. I'm just saying that's not necessarily a bad thing as long as you're not completely convinced that it's the character design of the century and everyone will want to read about them.

      Also, if I understood wrong and you're not actually 10 years old: I'm so sorry lol

      metaphisto
      2
  • 23%, huh? Might as well make a short description of my OC Ninetails. She's a Ninetales from Pokmon, but I changed her name to avoid confusion with other Pokmon of her species. We're talking about a Kanto Ninetales, btw. She has fire powers only. As a Vulpix, she was caught and treated well by her trainer. But he soon became abusive and started feeding her less and less, making her starve, as well as forcing her to evolve and to learn the moveset she has now: Flamethrower, Quick Attack, Confuse Ray and Mystical Fire. After many attempts of trying to survive, Nine was abandoned by her trainer. Slowly learning to live on her own and the bruises she had healing.

    But despite all of this, she'll never stop having faith in humanity and Pokmon and will do anything to protect her loved ones!

    Lusiana Ren
    3
    • I feel so bad for her! She's so unique and she has an equally sad and detailed background story. I have a soft spot in my heart for OCs like her. Love her-

      MochiTraceiChan
      1
    • Kinda sounds like a relative of tails from sonic lmao

      Uuiuu
      1
  • My OC Donny is 26% a Gary Stu. The quiz said he could take some spicing up.

    Here is a quick summary of him:

    He is not a fan character, he is from an original story and one day when he was very little a sketchy man came up to his parents door and offered to buy him for $10,000 for a medical trial. His parents accepted the offer. The doctor said he would be brought back to his parents soon and unscathed but that did not happen.

    At the lab, they did lots of experiments on him, they tried to figure out the reason behind his immortality (which he was born with) by various methods, they tested medicines on him but their biggest project was trying to turn him into means of psychological warfare.

    They ended up giving him brainwashing powers which would give him the ability to make others develop schizophrenia, but the only downside was that he had schizophrenia himself. (This would probably not work in our universe but his universe has different science, psychology and physics.)

    He was in the lab until he was 15 and then he escaped through a tunnel in the ground he had been carving since he was 5. He ran away from home instead of going back because his parents were neglectful and abusive (well duh the literally SOLD him) 1/2

    RabiesSpreader
    3
    • and he found a secret society of mutants like himself who had escaped labs. He ended up living with them until he was 20 and decided to start a life for his own, get a job and buy a house.

      He found a pretty decent job as an artist, he bought a trailer and lived there and his schizophrenia was more manageable now as he was seeing a psychiatrist and taking prescription medications. Things were going pretty smoothly for him until a van full of people came to his house and took him back to the lab.

      This is all I have so far, please give suggestions! 2/2

      RabiesSpreader
      1
    • Name: Dominic Roebuck
      Age: 30
      Gender: Male
      Species: Mutated human
      Eye colour: Red
      Hair colour: Dark brown
      Race: Vietnamese

      RabiesSpreader
      1
    • My apologies for poor grammar, this was written at 2am

      RabiesSpreader
      1
  • I got a 29% !! Honestly, I was kind of scared that Ryuu would be around 50% or so, but 29% isn't all that bad! He's a fan OC from the series Danganronpa, and is the ultimate Vampire (thus why I thought his score would be higher) I can't send his entire biography, but basically his past was that he'd constantly get kicked out of all the homes he lived in due to him being a vampire, so he doubted who he was for a long time! The reason everybody hates him is because of his overly nice persona he displays as to not be hated. That persona of course failed, but he still displays it. Also he has pastel pink hair, red eyes, and he wears formal clothing so AHJKJHAJKAJ

    TokaKanashi
    3
    • he sounds like the guy my OC Nora would date.

      Nora is another OC of mine that I have yet to test this on. But she's a vampire who learned to survive and hunt by herself. She was 21 when she was bit, and her power was that she could read any dangerous part of a book and have it happen to her enemies, which aren't much. Her eyes are still a fierce scarlet red from being a vampire. Sorry if this isn't as informative as my other OC descriptions.

      MochiTraceiChan
      2
    • 24% for Nora. Neat!

      Oke so she is the child of Moru and Kechi, but was kidnapped and raised by Ane. She decided to leave at 18, and managed to make her own home. She enjoys reading, watching tv/movies, playing video games (mostly Animal Crossing), flowers, and coffee. But when she turned 21, she was bitten by a rogue vampire before swiftly transforming. She's more Twilight based than Danganronpa, but if these two met, I think they'd be well together! =)

      (Again, sorry if this is too short lol-)

      MochiTraceiChan
      2
    • I feel like our characters could be nice together. How do you feel about them?

      MochiTraceiChan
      0
  • I got a 19% which isn't to bad, she's a bit older than me by at least 5 years though she doesn't have a specifically set age seeing as how i use her an awful lot for role-plays. Yes she's an 'experiment' (i know so original, but hear me out). She was artificially created, they wanted to see how far they could push it and create 'super humans/weapons' and of course created a few animals in the process. you cant jump straight to humans in most cases. She owns one of these animals, a cat names calypso. The cat has the parasyte vibe for those who know the manga and anime. Basic description of the cat is well it's normal cat at first glance green eyes dark brown fur little white patches or spots, pretty nice looking cat till it opens 5 eyes and it's tail splits into 2 bone blades and starts talking more or less. Over all though still a cat and it has a very limited understanding of language.

    Dachi is a red head with hazel eyes but they do change colors. Specifically her whole eye turns to a static sort of silver color when she's singing. (mostly because it's pretty fun to color in my refs for her and she's a siren. Some how they managed to get siren DNA, mythological creatures and demons are pretty common in the rps i use her in so it isn't to far fetched And since she's in predominately magical worlds and a siren she does have the whole thing where she gets to wet she suddenly has no longer has legs and is stuck with fins till she dries off. Which sucks since she's constantly getting shoved into pools, ponds, sprayed with water guns, and or just getting drenched in water by the other characters just because they can really. She was behind in the development part of her child hood walking wasn't to far behind normal but she never said a single word till she was 7. (First word was 'fries' which she literally screamed after stealing someones french fries and dropping them when she tripped) She's near sighted and needs to wear glasses, though she rarely does because she

    Useless bean
    4
    • THAT is how I wish I said my first word. Also I think you reached the word limit bc I can't view more of it but I'm really interested since this is really original. Can I trouble you to type the part missed out? It stopped when the story was about to mention the reason she rarely wears her glasses

      Orange WW
      2
    • She is so cool. I wrote a description of one of my OCs on another user's comment, and I wrote 2 comments of my own describing 2 other OCs (one of them is 2 but on the same one so technically 3)

      MochiTraceiChan
      1
    • 2 replied character descriptions now lol
      They're the replies from MochiTraceiChan.

      MochiTraceiChan
      1
    • I feel bad for shouting "DAICHI WO FUMISHIMETE" when you wrote that her name was Dachi. Pretty interesting character tho. Can you please try writing the rest of the story?

      Kurapikaishot
      1
  • Hm, 23% eh. I get it really, but most of my answers were a yes and no most of the time. Sort of.

    Just to be clear, my oc is called Leo, fairly small kid younger then me, seems about ten but is twelve due to lack of sun and nourishment. Brown greasy hair uncut for most of the time I have had him and just slightly looks like a girl a little bit.

    Now for the yes and no questions, usually related to powers or some unbelievable power up. Now first things first. The guy's hella weak as weak can get! Remember when I said he looks two years younger then if he should? That's not due to him being cute but dangerously thin and frail, his little muscles aren't going to win any fights anytime soon.

    But then that leads to his...complicated abilities. He has the ability to have his soul exit his body to a invisible astral form, and can take control of someone's body if they are in any way thinking or close to death he is either gets kicked out after about a minute or two or just leaves and automatically is reverted back into his inhabited but alive body. Now for context of story, Leo ain't a smart guy, can't talk and just sort of trusts everybody, but not in a good loveable way where he convinces everybody to be his friend.

    Leo lives in a pretty damned world, a slight too edgy do my tastes actually. Constantly on end exploited and overused and manipulated powers known or not, the story revolves around odd jobs he does under many different types of philosophy and influences from other people while getting a little bit of cash for essentials in a diplomatic world.

    Think Kino's journey, but everybody is a bad guy. As for mental illnesses go, I sure as heck don't know anything about them, but Leo's lack of common sense and speech is constantly a problem and we all know his lack of pecs.

    Seriously though, because if my mostly yes and no answers, can anybody review my short was bad summary of my decent character. One of my first oc's by the way, still new to all this.

    Justaguy
    7
    • Tbh, this looks really interesting! I dont think that it should be 23% Mary Sue... this sounds incredibly original! Good luck with the story!

      trigeda_kru
      0
    • Mine was lower her name is Lin she has powers and a odd eye color that can flash but is always scared and no one likes her because of it she got 11

      Bandananna
      -1
    • Mine got a 26. She is my age and has unatral eyes and hair and where's the clothing I wish I would wear so that's probably why she got a 26.but she doesn't have a tragic backstory or anything she has pretty much the same backstory as me she does have laws of course everyone has flaws. But she's just more of the perfect character I wish I was but not exactly she has the same flaws that's me except for the shortness problem I'm very short andshe has the same flaws as me except for the shortness problem I'm very short and she's quite tall. Taller than most of her friends.she's from the same country as most of the characters but one character but that's because that one character moved from different country.oh and also I have a ghost character and an alien character so I guess there's count.but those characters are just for comic relief.they're not really main characters they're just kind of weird background characters.falling all she's a pretty normal person she did just dye her hair and I think she's just wearing contacts but I'm not a hundred percent sure and she only is wearing the clothes I wish I would wear in only has the body shape I wish I had. :/ So that's most likely why she got at 26% and not like 10....

      Longcouch
      0
  • My character is a falcon harpy named Cass (Cassiopeia). She is from my comic series “Light Weilders”. She currently has only met my deer-centaur, Vincent, but becomes a valuable member of the team. The story takes place in a world where races like elves, harpies, lamias, wilds (people who can turn into animals), etc. are common, and humans are rare. She also has only one power. She can shoot these sharp feathers from her wings, but she can’t go rapid-fire or the will cut into her arm. They also cause her to not be as fast of a flier. She has warm skin, brownish black hair, and bright blue eyes. Her clothes are a bit tribal but still contemporary in her realm. Also she can easily wear them because the shirt is sleeveless and simply ties around the neck. Is this OC ok? Should I spruce her up a bit? I got 19% Mary Sue

    GhostlyGirl86
    6
    • I think if she were a Mary Sue she would have no physical limitations, but because you've already put some in, she already comes across as well established. I like it!

      wonderwriter3000
      1
    • i personally would flesh out her personality a little more

      goblincore
      2
    • I have a of named Laren and she is 44 pircent marry sue

      Life rules
      1
  • I got 21. The OC I used for the quiz was Tierra Greene. She has Earth abilities due to an experiment done to her. She can only use Earth and cannot use any other element.

    She is the illegitimate daughter of a Queen and a psychopathic scientist. Her father experimented on her and other children. She was sent to a childless couple but was kidnapped by her actual paternal aunt and the couple were burnt alive.

    Tierras deadly sin is mainly pride as she isnt very modest.

    She later marries and has children.

    Raven13
    3
  • My Oc I used here is called Quinton Williams, hes a 26 year old investigative detective with Aspergers, depression, anxiety, and a few other mental problems due to some past trauma that heavily relates and impacts him in the story and is a key component to character growth.

    Hes from Kansas and grew up on a farm, along with training for his detective role, so hes well built and pretty toned, he maintains this by training regularly and walking his dogs. Hes very unkept and looks messy but hes a pretty good looking guy, hes got freckles beauty marks and scars littering his body, hes also covered in bruises and other injuries because he bruises easily and doesnt really care.

    Hes very unkept and doesnt really care about his appearance, and doesnt take care of himself, he has scruff, bags under his eyes, and his hair is a mess. He relies on caffeine for his day and occasionally finds himself drinking alcohol. He takes meds for his issues. Hes socially awkward, as in he has trouble functioning correctly around people unless theyre super close. He gets hyperfixated on things easily and says really weird and awkward things in attempts to be funny or relatable, which leaves him nowhere.

    He also has some other personal issues that are spoilers to my story.

    His bf/husband is a dude named Damien, whos the opposite of him. Damien is super well kept, flashy, rich, confident and well liked. Theyve been friends for about a decade and a half and Quinn is the only person Damien became close with due to strictness with his dad and an inferiority complex with his sister

    Chommii
    2
    • I also have Aspergers and depression/anxiety, I dont want people to think I gave it to him without knowing about it btw lol

      Chommii
      2
    • So what are Damien's flaws? Sounds like this could make a really cool story if there's some kind of twist, like your guy Quinton viewing Damien as perfect until at some point it all falls apart (maybe Quinton cannot accept the truth (if so, make the reason why part of the plot)), or maybe Damien is like a metaphor for who Quinton wishes he could be (maybe bc of his mental illnesses), and he doesn't actually exist (although I would make Quinton aware of this (but maybe not the reader), since otherwise you'd have to add another mental illness to the list (since I don't think delusions like believing you have a perfect husband when you have none are a symptom of either of the two illnesses you mentioned), and the list will just seem like that: a list) but something like that anyway will really flair up your concept, make it shine, tie it all together ya know

      metaphisto
      2
    • I relate A LOT with your OC Quinton there.

      Meilin Lee
      1
  • Right, so I got 27% so I might as well describe them.

    My OC is a self insert, made to represent myself in my YouTube videos and roleplays. Her name is Mud and she's about 6'7, from head to hoof. Her legs are a deer's, and she has a black bushy tail. She's extremely skinny with a flat chest (my body type) and mostly wears an oversized batman t-shirt accompanied by a yellow, leather collar.

    She has pale skin and freckles, and her hair is light orange. Her hair is extremely curly and is worn in a ponytail. One of her eyes is black with a hazel, heartshaped pupil, and the other is hazel with a black heartshaped pupil. She's filled with bees, and because of that became a walking beehive and cannot feel pain.

    Some of the non-self insert properties, is that she's a creation of a super prestigious demon family. Mud's cannon name is Moss, and she works as a servant for the family. She had raised almost all of the family's children. Moss was created by Kiru to be overly powerful. He took the properties of the most dangerous animals on earth and put them together.

    Most of Moss' obstacles are stemmed from her mental state. She's terrified of failure, and gets attached to people way too easily. She has a rather childish personality, and often says things without thinking that makes people dislike her easily. Moss is also really stubborn and doesn't like accepting help or anything like that.

    m0rguemud
    2
    • Also, she has rounded black ears that comes out of where human ears are, and a bee earing hangs off of one.

      m0rguemud
      1
  • Took this quiz out of curiosity and got 15% lol. This non-fandom OC, Cedine, ticked all the boxes of having strange eyes and hair, in shape, young (22), and attractive. Her hair (brunette with streaks of white) and eye color (orange and ice blue) are both explained by the use of magic, something that is completely ordinary in her world.

    I honestly thought Id get a higher score seeing as she has a rough upbringing and is unusually strong in her abilities. To be fair to myself I made her when I was twelve, and that was eight years ago. She wouldve been like 60% Sue had I not forged her into a balanced character over time. It turns out compassion, tenacity, and a keen sense of justice pair really well with a short temper, recklessness, and a headstrong personality.

    KalinaKachow
    2
  • I got 25% (better than 100 lmao). My o/c was from Lookism (biologically female). She's a child of Charles Choi and sister of Crystal. Though she looked pretty average (black hair, brown eyes, a bit slender figure and has some couple scars on her face from her training) she's still insecure about herself especially when Crystal has more potential than her being a capable fighter. This caused a competition between the two for their father's approval. She's insecure about her hand to hand combat skills that she uses weapons but she's still needs more training. She also doesn't like socializing but also hates being alone. It all changed when she met Daniel Park (main character) when he's still being bullied and she defended him from the bullies despite being scared on the inside. Daniel is one of her closest friends (she secretly has a crush on him). But she feels jealous when Crystal/Zoe gets close to him. Yet she's not open about her feelings and she feels complicated about it since she never got the approval of her father and she's afraid of rejection. She also acts cowardly when faced into much horrible situations but once she gets serious she can keep up with her opponent (but there's still chance that she'll loose especially when it's opponents like Gun, Goo, etc..). She also likes listening to music and art. She also likes learning the guitar but it's a bit hard for her to learn so she's just giving up on playing it. Thoughts?

    emojellyace08
    2
  • I got 14%

    I used my main OC Evie Summers. She has short black hair with an orange streak (dyed) and dark brown eyes. She has an extreme phobia of vomiting, but she has a very weak stomach, so she ends up almost vomiting everyday. She is kinda smart, and she is disliked among a few students, as she can be extremely nasty. She has insomnia. She is 15 years old, so 2 years older than me. She is a bisexual queen. She dresses emo, gothic and grunge. Her favourite bands are Gorillaz and Nirvana. She is American and lives in Aberdeen. She writes Wattpad fanfiction for funsies. She often uses British slang.

    I expected her to be more Mary Sue lmfao.
    She's basically a different version than me.

    If I was a nasty American 15 year old with black hair and emetophobia and insomnia.

    woah.

    cootcocaine
    2
  • Your character is 27% a Mary Sue! 27%

    Original characters at this level could probably take a bit of spicing up, but fan characters are probably pretty good. Please remember that the traits listed in this test are not in themselves bad but can be bad when added up. I am not trying to bash your character.

    The character in question is my OC, Olive Wyatt Lich. She's goblin and half human. When in the transformation to full goblin form, her hair changes from reddish brown to ginger. She has natural red eyes that are like a cat (in slits, can see in the dark.) The whites around the eyes turn yellow when going full goblin. Her freckles enlarge into medium sized spots on her moss green skin. She's 25 years old. She's orphaned, adopted by her two mothers. She's a triplet. Her sister, Izzy, caused the scar across the bridge of Olive's nose. She's from a whole different universe, which explains why she's part goblin. When meeting the goblin king, she becomes knighted. Her Mother, Amaris, aided and abetted to Aunt Kyrie who happened to be a major wreaker of havoc. They had to flee from the world they were originally from by time hopping to a different universe. They have to stay hidden from the spies on Earth. Ace Neve Quinnton, one of the top dog spies, was sent to track down Olive and her family. But then he got attached and now is defending them from the High Council. Ace ended up getting blackmailed by Izzy and is also conspiring with her and the most dangerous criminal in Ulysses, Praxidike. Many more things happened with my other characters relating to Olive, but that will make a novel of a comment on here if I type any longer.

    Glad she's not too much of a Mary Sue.

    MTMothkey
    2
  • Got a 17 percent, my character is Araminta (Minty) Jones, an eleven-year old witch living in a small, isolated town in the English area, surrounded by a forest. Unlike most magics, she doesnt hide her powers. She is known as the town witch, and despite her age, people will often come to her for healing, spells, and potions. In her free time, she enjoys telling stories to and playing with the other kids in the town, as well as coming up with new charms and potions to help more people. She knows practically everybody in the area and is widely liked by the town. She does somewhat poorly handle the job of being the helper for pretty much everything magic. She tends to put everyone else above herself, even when her own troubles might be worse. She was raised by her grandmother who sided when she was 7, and she does have the ability to talk to many spirits but cant seem to find her grandmother.

    0Idkwhatimdoing0
    2
  • I got 7%.

    Some info about the character: His name is Linaere, one of the 2,000 people housed on a space station called Station Ianno. (Not a fan character, original universe although heavily based off of The 100). He has a very lightly brown skin tone, greasy black hair, and is about 6'2. He is 21 years old, and was a guard trainee on the station. However, his commander decided to send him down to earth with the other 1,000 (There are 5 stations, 200 was sent down from each.). He tried to protest, but on the day of the Ground Calling, he was sent with them anyways. He and Freya (another guard trainee sent down) used their skills in survival and fighting methods to promote the survival of the 1,000. Eventually, he almost died from a rough winter illness that they called Yellowthroat, due to the yellow-ish mucus that they would cough up. It was, in fact, an uncontrolled case of the influenza.

    LimonSoda
    2
    • 4 words.
      I. Love. This. Character.

      MochiTraceiChan
      1
    • THIS CHARACTER LOOKS GREAT :D if you have a reference, then I can draw him

      CuteDuck21
      0
  • I got 19% Mary Sue for mine. I thought it'd be higher, but it could certainly use more character building. My character is Eggplant Man, who is from an alternate reality where a flabby bioengineer named Lord Nuggets used a giant weapon in a spaceship to alter everyone's DNA, which in turn ended up either giving people superpowers, or transforming then into some anthropomorphic creature, or even both, in some cases. Eggplant Man was subject to the former. He's an impulsive 17-year-old who's real name is Chris Cross, and his family ditched him for a vacation they never returned from, so he's been taking care of himself for a year. He took on the name Eggplant Man when Lord Nuggets' (now called Chickpanuggets due to being transformed into a bird by his machine) machine gave him the ability to summon deadly eggplant-themed weapons. In appearance, he is a tall, thin boy with black hair and teal eyes. After gaining his unique abilities, he started wearing a purple, green, and yellow costume to solidify his superiority, but since everyone had been genetically modified, they gave him no heed. As a result, Eggplant Man has started trying to do everything and always doing the first thing that comes to mind so he can gain attention.

    But then again, very little of what I just wrote is even a selectable option.

    Bob Bovine
    2
    • This is actually awesome!

      BurgalMan
      1
  • 15%!

    Gideon's an NPC character from the game Stardew Valley.

    He moved to Pelican Town as soon as he turned 18, which I suppose I want him to be in his early 20s, so we'll say he moved around the same time Elliott came along.

    Gideon was adopted into the family after the eldest sister died, and while he wasn't originally supposed to totally replace her(Teagan and David, his adopted parents, say that his adoption had nothing to do with her death, but that's definitely a lie), but that didn't stop them from sort of subconsciously pressuring him into fitting into her picture Be a teacher! Learn harmonica! Be the quiet, quirky boy! He's the kind of person who's more in the in-between when it comes to feminine and masculine, so I would like I eventually excuse that as part of his parents' confusion. Also, in his story, it's canon that the only reason he dyes his hair(brown to yellow) is to further distinct him from the dead girl, Masha.

    His adopted brothers are twins Oscar and Ethan, and Oscar just sort of pities Gid for his situation(Don't get me wrong, they have loving parents, but they have made their mistakes while raising Gid) while Ethan seems to blame Gid for what happened to Mash.

    As for his personality, Gideon's really happy-go-lucky and boyish(naive, playful, curious) traits make him really friendly with, like, everyone in Pelican Town. Of course he does have his insecurities(no thanks to his parents) and there are the moments when they decide to wreck him, full force. He can also be sort of a pushover, so he could never really voice his discomfort, when around his parents.

    His friends are Sam(they talk, but aren't super close), Alex(Gid actually kinda crushes on him, and they can also kind of relate to eachother about discomforts with their families), and Robin(he sees her as a motherly figure alongside Teagan, thoouugh does kind of choose to ignore how she is with her own kids).

    I dunno if there's much else to say? Uahh, he has a pet chameleon named Ron, i

    Aliienated
    3
    • s bi but leans more toward guys, and! Actually, I do want to point out more in-depth, is that one of his heart events consists of him trying to come to term with being interested in 2 people, at once.I think it's one of his main character arcs(1 of them of course being him trying to actually connect with his family), is him trying to understand his feelings, and trying to relay them to the player. Him trying to be an adult, y'know? Of 'course, there would be tears, though. It's, like "Hey. I have strong feelings for both you and another person. I don't want this other person to get in the way of this relationship, but I don't think I'm gonna get over them, very easily. I want to know if you're okay with these other feelings, because I feep like I should be honest and open to you, before anything."He's still a sort of work in progress, though, so some of this isn't totally final.

      Aliienated
      1
    • Hmmm... It says my char is 17% Mary Sue...
      Tell me if this sounds like a Mary Sue:

      He is slightly evil. He is shapeshifter witch who's naughty and loves excitement. He is a troublemaker, but is more powerful than the average witch. He's pretty smart, but often lets his ego get in the way. Very egotistic and oftentimes sarcastic. He is a nomad and travels around looking for trouble. Is a loner and doesn't really like interaction with others unless they are his pets or are battling him (but he is CRAZY about foxes). He used to be a very nice human, but ever since he turned into a witch and was rejected by his home, he became resentful of other people and opted to trust nobody.

      So basically he's a mixture of playful, naughty, lazy, and bitter.

      DaSunfish
      1
  • My character got 10%. Had it been 10 years ago when I first created her, her Mary Sue level probably would have been a lot higher. Her name is Arisa Riddle, she's a character from an original story I'm still working on. It's based on Alice in Wonderland, but an alternative take on it. She's a 16 year old girl, with decently nice looks, well-mannered, has a sharp mind, but is also rather submissive and has some anxiety problems. However, I wanted to make Arisa as realistic as possible so she can feel relatable to other girls her age. Especially nerdy girls or the ones with social issues.

    Although she has a rather sad past, it's a key plot point to help shape her into the person she grows to be. She had a rocky relationship with her strict parents since she was a child. They were both successful doctors with busy careers, so they often neglected their own daughter and only showed interest in her grades (and be harsh to her when she didn't exceed their expectation). When she was about 7, her parents were planning on divorcing and were fighting on who would take in Arisa. On the same night, all 3 of them got into a car accident and only Arisa survived. Eventually her much more loving uncle and aunt adopted her, but she still blamed herself for not being the perfect daughter her parent's wanted her to be. So she locks away the things about her she deemed "flawed" and dedicated the rest of her childhood being a model student/daughter, in order to not to be unwanted by her new caretakers.

    Years later, at 16 years old, Arisa and her guardians are moving to a new area when their car suddenly breaks down in the middle of the road. She notices a strange red cat in the area and chases after it into the woods when it steals an important item from her. There she runs into a strangely dressed young man, with white skin and hair, as well as red eyes (and a pair of rabbit ears and a tail). He literally drags her into a cave where they are teleported to a world called "Wonderland".

    arisainwonderlan
    3
    • Okay, this is seriously very original. Like, a Wonderland AU? I wonder what the rabbit man's motives are for dragging her into Wonderland. If you turned this story into a book or comic or whatsoever, I'm making sure I read it. (if I sound sarcastic, I'm so sorry because it's my usual speaking tone

      Orange WW
      1
    • I BOTH LOVE AND FEEL BAD FOR ARISA OMG-

      She's such an amazing character, and I personally agree with Orange WW's comment, I'd definitely check out your series if you made one!

      MochiTraceiChan
      1
  • My character is named Ashanna. (Ash-a-na)

    She lives on a planet called Emoria. It is basically a replica of the earth with different animals and contidents. It is an au Earth where everyone doesn't pollute the plant, has elemental powers (Fire, Air, Water, Earth (called Emoria),Engery and Darkness. If anything Major happens on earth they alert Emoria if it was good or bad and what lead up to it so they can avoid it if bad and try to make it happen if good. Also they are all replacements of humans on earth. Ashanna is a replacement for a girl named Lori. Whenever something major happens they feel their pain. At anytime the replacement for a mom giving birth will fall onto the floor while giving birth and a baby will appear next to her.

    Ashanna is a Fire Emalent (that is what they call Humans) SHe is 14 and has no idea who her mom is. The person representing their mom fell on the floor with 3 other girls next to her. They all live together now. Ashanna and her "sister Novella (Energy) were practicing their elements when Novella git shocked and died. Ashanna blames herself and has Tanidenphobia, the fear of partnership in emoria. She had brown eyes \that look like they are burning when shes mad. She is 14 and 5,8 my dream height. She has black hair that is died red and magenta. She is very good at her power.

    Ashanna
    2
    • she is 32% Mary sue :/

      Ashanna
      1
    • I love her. Nothing else I can say-

      MochiTraceiChan
      1
  • I made a new OC, Morutchi Kontayo!

    She is a circus performer that has anger issues but is still easily excited. She has a lavender like bear cap that covers her hair, a purple dress with black polka-dots all over, darkish blue jeans, and boots. She's Chilean and occasionally likes to make traditional South American dishes such as empanadas for both her and her workpartners who are each around the same age as her, 18-19 (she's 19, an '01 gal [I think]). Her birthday is May 9th, which happens to be Mother's day.

    She got 28% but I tried to answer the answers that I know are true/false about her.

    MochiTraceiChan
    2
  • 15 % Marry Sue isnt terrible. Although in my character, Luckys, universe the god trait is kinda the whole point. Hes known as an almighty omnipotent being but hes really still scared and blissfully ignorant at times. In his universe he created humans (twice after the first time failed) once on the moon which was attacked by other civilizations with bombs that created craters on the moon (science is different here) and because of Luckys ability to make everything from clay (almost everything) the moon was covered in a gray dust (no wind on the moon, no clay dust floating away.). After being taken by the civilizations King (who was created by Luckys abusive goddess mother to fix him due to him being imperfect in her eyes, white diamond who) he was married off to him, he was abusive, he broke Lucky for a bit. Lucky escaped to Earth, he hit Earth hard enough to crack the entire crust, (the Hadean period) and he fell asleep for a few million years. Waking up to see that he was alone he cried and cooled the earth, helping create an atmosphere. It turned out his twin had hitched a ride to Earth with him and created volcanoes so Lucky could safely walk around. (Hes not immune to fire you know) After covering the world in a bit of clay his older brother arrived from being frozen in the core of Neptune. To put it short he created water and then life began. Now you might be asking, wheres the sun? His twin brother and him made the sun as a project for their mother before she threw them to different corners of the galaxy. (Explains universal expansion.) This isnt very relevant but he is technically blind, he can see shapes but only where direct sunlight hits. (He cant move at night or sunset.) and only sunlight, no flashlight, no fire. He mostly navigates by touch which makes sense since he likes to sculpt in the sunlight. Also sorry if it seems out of order its 2 in the morning.

    Yeetser0Neetster
    2
    • A lot of these questions came word-for-word from the Universal Mary-Sue Litmus Test from Springhole.

      sporkupine
      2
  • 23%

    Huh. That's pretty nice,especially for a fanmade character. I didn't want her TOO boring to be considered as a mere background character (or comic relief), or TOO much of a Mary-sue to be unrelatable. But I honestly expected her to have a higher... Mary-sueness percent? I mean, she IS part of a line of "cursed" decendants of a main character and gets discriminated because if it...

    But what if the races have unusually colored hair and eye colors (ex. Purple, green, blue, pink, etc.), which is considered normal in their world? I don't think they would be a Mary-sue with that, except if the character has some type of hair/eye color that stands out.

    LunarWarrior16
    3

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