Bro I neeeed help writing my book
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of tears.
“You already ruined everything Hope, why not!” My best friend, Noah, half yelled.
“I-I need someone like you just please, Noah, please don’t leave.” I said tears streaming down my face as he walked away into the distance. I thought “how did I mess up this bad? How could I lose my best friend? How did this even start?”
Chapter 1
Will this love ever last
“I’m not racing you!” I said for what felt like the 10th time in the past second.
“Oh come one please,” Noah begged.
“Oh my gosh, fine! If it’ll shut you up.” I said annoyed.
This is all I have I started 3 months ago 😭 -
Paragraph Idea:
We raced a few more times until we were both out of breath. We lay on the grass panting. "Thanks Hope" Noah said smiling.
"Your welcome" I replied sitting up and retrieving my phone out of my pocket.
"Wanna go again? Loser buys the Winner something from the shop" Noah suggests.
"Your on" I reply clicking the Clock app on my phone.
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Thank you so much! This helps so so much I love how even though it’s a small paragraph it shows the connection between Hope and Noah! This story I’m trying to kinda make like my crush and my relationship (or well ex crush because he’s a jerk) but before all that stuff. We started out as like the best of friends then (from what like 5 people tell me) he had a crush on me but I didn’t realize that even though it was SUPER obvious now that I think about it and then his crush on me fades and then a year later I had a crush on him while we were still best friends so I’m trying to make Hope and Noah’s relationship like that a tiny bit! I hope this helps you help me put together a story that (someday) I hope to publish and if I do anyone who helps me will get FULL credit and I will even put in the acknowledgments “To all the people who helped me from GTQ, they basically wrote this book” 😂 thank you so much @BiscutBear37!
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Aww, thanks. I like the story plot and I will try too help you as best as I can. I'm glad you enjoyed my
paragraph and the best books always are based on a true story. :) -
Totally agree! Anyways here is the next paragraph (with a LOT of help from @BiscutBear37 basically I copied that paragraph she wrote it was so good!)
Chapter 1
Will this love ever last
“I’m not racing you!” I said for what felt like the 10th time in the past second.
“Oh come one please,” Noah begged.
“Oh my gosh, fine! If it’ll shut you up.” I said annoyed. We got into our stances and, at the speed of light, took off.
We raced a few more times until we were both out of breath. We lay on the grass panting. "Thanks Hope" Noah said smiling.
"Your welcome" I replied sitting up and retrieving my phone out of my pocket.
"Wanna go again? Loser buys the Winner something from the shop" Noah suggests.
"You’re on" I reply clicking the Clock app on my phone. Again we got into our stances and counted down. 3…2…1. We shot forward. I pushed ahead, running as fast as I could, panting I made it past the finish line first when I turned around and saw Noah talking to another girl! He was free to do that but for some reason it made me feel… anger? He walked over, a frown on his face. “Hey! What was that all about? What’s wrong,” I said a hint of hurt in my voice I covered with concern.
“I went up to her to say I liked her shirt and she said ‘stop looking at my shirt creep!’” Noah said on the verge of tears. I put my arm around him gave him a hug and told him to sit down, then my body filled with anger, I ran to the girl and said.
“Hey! What the hell is your problem!”
“Um, what do you mean?” She asked taking out her AirPod.
“Um, I mean yelling at my best friend to not look at your shirt and calling him a creep! You have no right to make assumptions like that. He literally just said he liked your shirt that doesn’t make him a creep!”
“Ugh, stop defending him it’s creepy that he would just go up to a random person and say that. You don’t have to go all ‘I’m his girlfriend’ like leave me alone.” The girl said as she put her AirPod back in and while I walked away to Noah who was now walking towards me I heard her say under her breath “What a creep.” Naturally I charged at her and was about to rip her skin off her body when Noah came from behind me and grabbed me.
“Hope! Calm down. Okay, she’s just another person.” I breathed in deep calming down. That’s when I realized Noah had never been this close to me, it felt… good. Oh god, I can’t like this! He’s my best friend. I started hyperventilating. “Hope? Are you okay. Um, sit down.” Noah said I sat down on the grass, not breathing but still breathing. “Listen to my voice.”
“Okay.” I managed to push out in between my breaths.
“Take a deep breath and count from 10-1. Okay, do you want me to count for you?” I nodded “10…9…8…7…6…5…4…3…2…1,” I had slowed my breathing and escaped from my panic attack. But, my question still stood, will my love for Noah ever last?
(The whole reason I’m calling the book lasting is because I’m asking questions about can love really last or does someone have to make it last and basically at the end of each book I’m going to make it like the answer to each question I’ve honestly never gotten this far into the book before because I always have a major case of writers block and then when I go to work on a short story for class I have like 25 million ideas 🙄 it’s the best!) (not really the best) -
I like your end to the chapter-if you start the next chapter I'm happy to help you again-the reason that I haven't written anymore is because I don't want to intrude on your ideas and I'm not really sure what your plot line is :)
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