My (new) Writings
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Thread Topic: My (new) Writings
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Oh my gosh you're making my smile so huge right now
I must ask though--did you mean the examples for my question (Idk what it was exactly) "What do you do when you get angry?" That's from a fanfiction I've started revising. Or did you mean the role-playing questions?
If you're talking about the role-playing questions, I made those up on the spot. However, I did like it and start making something heavily based off of it that I could share here -
To The DorkWhoWrites-
Thank you, but it's true, I won't be surprised if I see one of your stories published one day :) -
You make me so happy! thank you so very much :)
Ill try to get these published one day -
Part Whatever I'm On:
What I see stuns me speechless.
The lighting in the room is slightly blue, something I'm not used to. The room itself is probably at least five hundred square feet. The floor is a pearly white, so shiny that I can see my reflection.
Scattered across the room in a careful yet messy order are machines. I can’t even begin to describe them—the only things I can name are screens and keyboards.
So many screens and keyboards.
The screens are all dark. I tentatively walk to the nearest one, careful not to scuff the floor. I know how my parents get when things get dirty.
I’m directly in front of the machine now. It has a polished surface made of some type of dark metal. The screen is easily three yards wide, if not more. There’s no keyboard on this one, although there is a small, elevated box on the surface. It looks a bit less than a foot wide and is a perfect square.
As if something has taken over my body, my hand places itself on top of the square.
The screen immediately lights up, so bright that I have to blink at first to get my bearings. When I can finally see enough to stop squinting, I make out the red words shown.
PROJECT VIRGO
My mind is slow; it doesn’t even make out that there’s a floating dashboard suddenly in front of me until a few seconds later.
I stumble back a few steps, as if the dashboard were to spit venom out on me. It doesn’t though, which I take as a move of peace.
Stepping towards it again, I examine the dials and switches that litter it. There are so many, and I can’t resist the childlike urge to mess with some of them.
Flipping one of the switches and pressing a few buttons, I almost feel like I’m supposed to be doing this. A flash of benevolence flares up inside me, and it feels almost right.
The flare goes away just as quickly as it came. I don’t feel much different—not confused, not scared, just curious as to what lays in front of me. -
ACK ACK NO NOT BENEVOLENCE I MEANT BELLIGERENCE
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I’m thinking of starting a story, or maybe even just a series of journal entries, about someone who is based off of myself
So basically my life on a page with different people
I think it might help me understand myself a little bit more -
My hand flies to the dashboard, instinctively hitting buttons and moving switches as if I’ve been doing this for years.
After a few moments, a new image appears, replacing Project Virgo on the screen.
I can’t understand what it is at first.
The screen shows a beautiful landscape, dark purple sand beside a clear-water ocean. You can see different types of seashells and sea life in the water, burrowing in the sand or swimming with the waves.
It takes me a few seconds, but I somehow know what this place is called.
Rali.
On the screen, one little boy runs around, chasing a girl about his age. They can’t be more than ten.
I’m enticed as I watch them. Almost as if I’m watching a long-awaited production, I find myself on the edge of my seat, waiting to see if the boy catches the girl. I don’t know why I feel this way, but suddenly, watching the two children play is the most important part of my day.
Once the child catches his friend, both of them start laughing and their eyes begin to change color. Pale pink, orange, yellow.
One of my hands hits a small green button.
The screen immediately floods with information about Rali.
Population: 67,980,256
Magic: Summoners, shifters, speakers, empaths
Landscape: Variety
Allies: Morova, Adu, Jubilante, Liran, Indum
Hospitable
Plant Life: Variety
Leader: Idina Keltov
I can barely take it all in before my hand presses two buttons in front of me.
I look again at the screen as the words disappear, watching as the two children continue to play.
The girl that the boy was chasing seems to sense something right before her own eyes turn white. Her face loses its glee, and she looks up to the sky. The image of the children, the beach, Rali, disappears, and I’m staring at a black screen with one word across the center:
TERMINATED
Made more
Probably going to delete most of it but oh well -
This is really good. If you could lend some of your skills to my thing, [no urls]
In short, if this doesn’t appear as a link just go to the library and see who wants to write a successful book. By GinnyWeasleyBi. Love you and thank you. -
And sorry about the ending.
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I’ll go check it out!
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Characters for that *really* old PJO fanfic I started
I completely got rid of one of the main characters of the story so I had to start over lol
Main Characters:
Brooke Carter (Poseidon, sea)
Bree Allen (Athena, wisdom)
Quinn Hernandez (Hermes, messenger god)
Supporting Characters:
Adrienne Holmes (Hades, death)
Cadence Levisay (Athena, wisdom)
Felix Sanchez (Aletheia, truth)
Allegra Barlowe (Pelios, emotion)
Cecelia Hernandez (Mortal) -
This story sounds great-It reminds me of the Percy Jackson books is that what your story is based on? Anyway well done on all your writing so far! I am following the story and have enjoyed it! Once you are finished the book you could maybe make a series just as an idea.
I have made a thread called 'help me write a story' if you are happy to contribute please do though please don't feel pushed (I'm only asking as so far I only have two people writing and your writing skills are amazing!) But again, only if you feel comfortable and please read the descripting before.
Thank you xx
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Hi! Sorry I didn’t see this before now, I haven’t checked the library in a while 😅
I’m not to good with writing with people because I always get self-conscious, so I’m afraid I’ll have to decline the offer
I’ll make sure to check it out though and read what you’re writing :) -
Aww, that's fine. I understand. Thanks for reading it then-maybe you could give us some advice? It's fine if not. :)
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