A Poem I Wrote
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Thread Topic: A Poem I Wrote
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We all want to live forever.
We fight against death,
And hold on to our soul,
Fighting to keep it within our grasp.
But if I've learned one thing out of all of this,
It's that we need to know when to quit.
- Alana
3/1/11 -
So true.
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quit what?
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dig deeper into what the poem is saying. understanding does not come immediately. the best poems keep the reader thinking for a while. and when the meaning clicks into your head, it will all make perfect sense. :)
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this is what i leave for you. the final piece i put on here. think about it. embrace it if you want. i miss you already. but now i really have to stick to my promise and never return... *tears stream down face* bye.
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:'( Good poem and bye Alana
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